| "Runaway Puppy" Reviews/Comments [ 89 ] |
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2011 23:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super sad that you hadn't finish this. I remember when you were writing this fic I was excited for each new chapter. And I still want to know what is going to happen after all these years. Coming back to read old fic are awesome. the new ones are depressing me and coming back to the *back in the day fic* is refreshing somehow. |
Reviewed By: ram8005 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2009 00:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please spell Sango's name correctly. other than that the story wasn't bad. I did hope for a better ending, it just seemed incomplete somehow.
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Title: almost 2 years
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2009 15:54 EST
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in two months its going to be 2 years since lasta update i dont think the author is going to finish the fic
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Title: Meanie!
Reviewed By: Ashlan On: November 21, 2008 11:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to admit, delay the chapters almost a year will make your head hurt, unless you intend to ignore this... P/S: Sorry but as a reader, I had to be cruel. This story is truly attracted me, you know that??? Just MAKE an UPDATE!!!! WAAAAHHHHH!!!! >O
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Title: plz
Reviewed By: cleastol On: July 28, 2008 15:05 EDT
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plz tell me that your going to complete this story? I was hoping to see what happens next. I hate when an author starts a storie and not complete it. plz but out new chapters.
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Reviewed By: miauw [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 01:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved this story. I can't wait to see your next chapter. When will you update new chapter?
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Reviewed By: Neko Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2007 05:47 EST
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i would just love to see how sesshomaru handles inuyasha and how his father is going tohelp him.
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Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 18:52 EST
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This is one of my favorite stories, please update soon! I'm dying to know just what Inupapa has to say to Sesshomaru, to help him out with InuYasha! Please update!!!! B reading U!
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Reviewed By: FABIrox94 On: August 24, 2007 03:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is the best i've eva read i loved it to death and i cant wait for the chapters to come sooo pleeeeeeeaaase update soon i will definately carry on reading carry on the great work
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Tiny [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 03:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it needs all 10's because that is what i think this story is. I really love this story and i hope u continue writing it soon. I think it was very original and i did not find anything wrong with the spelling or grammer but i could be wrong i'm not a grammer/spelling expert. I enjoyed it very much it was funny and great all together. I loved the creativity you put into the story because most of the time u dont find a fanfic like this.
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Title: yo!
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 16:24 EDT
Comment/Review:
Ok than now how bout we hurry up and update yes. please update date it's been while and I'm starting to lose hope of this fic ever beening completed.
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Title: awesome!!
Reviewed By: Oryana On: May 01, 2007 15:12 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this one!! you changed a lot the characters' personalityies, but they're very amuzing! I like it, plz update soon!!!! and plz don't make Sesshoumaru suffer!! *puppy eyes*
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Reviewed By: D.L.I. On: April 07, 2007 06:23 EDT
Comment/Review:
Interesting story. You said you were looking for a job at an anime store? Try AnimeNuts or Simply Kids.
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Reviewed By: petpeeves123 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story scares me. You also mentioned modern ligo in the fedual era i.e. Virius and bateria which the names didn't exsist back then. Yes, I know this is just a story. I think this is funny in a almost bad grammer kind of way. When Inutashio said grandchildren did he mean over the years or all at once. I prefer over time because I just can't see them having several kids at once. Do you know how big a pain in the butt that will be? Don't forget that in your story that Naraku is still out there along with the jewel shards. Naraku could be used to cause so more havoic in your story before you plan a glorious battle to destroy you. Naraku could be used to test sesshomaur's strength of character. To prevent you from getting writter's block you should make a plot outline. that is for instents plan everything ahead of time. You could also get a beta reader to edit your story and to help you make it even better
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 12:58 EDT
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this definetly be interestin i cant wait update soon
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