| "Puberty Sux" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cheshire cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2002 19:18 CST
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That's an interesting dream. See, I told ya I'd read ch. 4. Very nice. I think Ruki's mother is regretint the way she treats Ruki in the dub. :) Ruki certainly flips out easily, doesn't she? Great work, K! :P |
Reviewed By: Digifan316 On: March 28, 2002 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TOM: He fell asleep in class?
BRIAN: You know what this means? HENRY'S NORMAL!
CROW: Continue please. |
Reviewed By: Pyrokinatic On: March 28, 2002 19:02 CST
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well.. so far, you got this thing of 'im dreaming im gonna die' thing, so keep this thing going! its great! |
Reviewed By: :+:*Star*Girl*02*:+: On: March 26, 2002 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
plz plz plz write more it's soooo cool!! |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2002 15:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done! Ruki and Jennie on a dinner date! The penguin... LOL! Love it! The setup imagery for Jen eating his steak with his bare hands was nicely well done. ...no pun intended. Only later we discover what he has done and what he discovered now this hunger must be satisfied. Jenrya now shares his problems to Ruki. Hopefully she can help him. Being more than just friends.
Amazing work! I can't wait for the next part.
~ Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2002 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool continuation! Wow! Gee, just to study during lunch period... What? A dinner date! Yeah! The mention of Kazu and Takato together was nicely put. (grins) Eep. Voices in his head. Is Jennie going psychic too? Wow! Now on to Chapter 3!
~ Jodi S. |
Reviewed By: GameGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2002 14:28 CST
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He was eating a rare steak with his hands? Dang! What the hell IS going on with him? I can't see him doing that! |
Reviewed By: GameGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2002 14:22 CST
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Takato and Kazu? But, I like TakatoXJeri and KazuxSusie!! (how would you couplize their names?) Oh, but I know you don't like Jeri, so that's probably why! And Susie's too young in this fic anyway. This is cool. |
Reviewed By: Cheshire cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2002 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I think Jen's a vamp. Vamps are cool. I like the way you wrote this fic, though. You have nice writting skills. Keep up the good work. Both ch.s were very nice and I'll look forward to the next. Thanx and Ja ne!
Cheshire |
Reviewed By: Digifan316 On: March 25, 2002 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TOM: Ok, he hears voices, eats weird, and dreams about a graveyard...
CROW: You know what that means...
BRIAN: Yeah, Henry's a PETA member that was stuck in a fur wearhouse when he was 10.
(BOTS look at BRIAN)
BRIAN: What? Its a theroy. Continue please. |
Reviewed By: dai On: March 25, 2002 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so Jen's gone camping and is pitching a tent, huh? Cool. WAX that tent post! |
Reviewed By: Hikaness On: March 25, 2002 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I liked it! ^_^ Great job! |
Reviewed By: Silva Noir [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2002 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
QUACK! wait... penguins don't quack. the ones at the aquarium sort of make a loud obnoxious "wonk wonk" sound. the little blue ones make a cheeping noise.
Jen: I'm not really a penguin you know... |
Reviewed By: pyrokinatic On: March 25, 2002 19:30 CST
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*imitating the jerry springer show* jen jen jen jen jen jen!
oh sorry... very nice very nice what am i saying that was purfect! keep it up. but how in the world do you put the name Rika and the word classy in the same sentence muchless the same paragraph.. geeze.. oh well keep it up |
Reviewed By: Digifan316 On: March 25, 2002 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRIAN: Show of hands, who thinks this is a set up for Rika and Henry?
TOM: Ahem.
BRIAN: Or jump.
(CROW rases his hand and TOM jumps up and down)
BRIAN: Continue. Good so far. |
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