| "Puberty Sux" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: dai On: March 25, 2002 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so Jen's gone camping and is pitching a tent, huh? Cool. WAX that tent post! |
Reviewed By: Hikaness On: March 25, 2002 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I liked it! ^_^ Great job! |
Reviewed By: Silva Noir [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2002 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
QUACK! wait... penguins don't quack. the ones at the aquarium sort of make a loud obnoxious "wonk wonk" sound. the little blue ones make a cheeping noise.
Jen: I'm not really a penguin you know... |
Reviewed By: pyrokinatic On: March 25, 2002 19:30 CST
Comment/Review:
*imitating the jerry springer show* jen jen jen jen jen jen!
oh sorry... very nice very nice what am i saying that was purfect! keep it up. but how in the world do you put the name Rika and the word classy in the same sentence muchless the same paragraph.. geeze.. oh well keep it up |
Reviewed By: Digifan316 On: March 25, 2002 14:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRIAN: Show of hands, who thinks this is a set up for Rika and Henry?
TOM: Ahem.
BRIAN: Or jump.
(CROW rases his hand and TOM jumps up and down)
BRIAN: Continue. Good so far. |
Reviewed By: Dai On: March 25, 2002 14:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Strangely, Jenra comes down with a case of tennis elbow.... |
Reviewed By: pyrokinatic On: March 25, 2002 14:27 CST
Comment/Review:
very nice, very nice indeed..... keep up the excellent work |
Reviewed By: Silva Noir [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2002 14:19 CST
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Ruki? dressed up? wonders never cease... (commenting on the second chapter) |
Reviewed By: Cheshire cat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2002 10:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well.. We have an interesting start going on here. I like mysterious dream. Great way to start this fic fic. *lol* You potray the characters very nicely. :) Interesting plot, too. Keep up the great work and I'll look forward to more! ^_^
Thanx and Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: GameGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2002 23:39 CST
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Yaaaay! Rukeee! Hey, is there any Jerkato in this? I have the feeling you don't like Jeri. |
Reviewed By: GameGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2002 23:36 CST
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All 17, even his little sister? Or, I guess she's not even in this... |
Reviewed By: Zell Hida On: March 21, 2002 07:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I really like this story. It's really cool. I wonder whats gonna happen next? Please continue |
Reviewed By: Silva Noir [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2002 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute so far! I like the pairing and the setup... always good whne there's more plot than just hooking up two charachters... makes me wonder what those dreams mean. Hmmm... |
Reviewed By: Digifan316 On: March 20, 2002 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BRIAN: Great Tamers fic.
CROW: Keep going, don't stop.
BRIAN: CROW!
CROW: What?
BRIAN: Habbit.
TOM: Next time, tape his mouth shut. |
Reviewed By: Mimi, Myself, & Iz. [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2002 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Doh! That's all? No! I want more! (groans) Oh well.
Neato! I alreay love the set up! A potential Ruki and Jennie (THERE! I SAID IT!) coupling story! Finally Ruki attends a school with Jennie! Or is it the other way? Any ways cool!
Oooo... and I can't wait for Hirokazu to appear in the series! (grins) I'm sure Takato can't wait too! (heehee)
Any ways, wonderful writing AND artwork! You truly can paint a beautiful picture in both story and art!
~ Jodi S. |
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