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| "Retribution" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] | | Pages (4): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 ] | Reviewed By: RebelByNature-nli- On: May 25, 2006 17:15 CDT
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First off i hope you have a great time at your prom. Okaaay no i didn't see that coming. So now i want to seriously wring Trowa's neck. I like Ms. Hediki. So cool. Well Talim's always gonna be my fav. 'Before I let this go any further....the last man to hit Tamil was his father...and he's somewhere lying in a ditch....in pieces.' i love that!
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 14:21 CDT
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O.o For some reason I can't see Trowa as a cop. I can see him as a gundam pilot and a Preventer but not a cop...Poor Talim!!!! We shall kill them all! *twitches* Is it bad that I'm starting to like Talim more than the G-boys?...
| Title: OMG YOU DEVIOUS LIL THING!
Reviewed By: Scarletty ^-^ On: May 25, 2006 13:05 CDT
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Hey, Wheee a chap just for me *swoons*. I'll be fine, I'll look out for the use of that in one of your fics. OMG What The Hell, No WAY!!! I started out ooh interesting, and then bamb I fell of the bed *grumbles* I was THAT shocked. OMG You certainly know how to hold together a surprise. God I never not in a million years suspected that. Poor Talim *cuddles* Poor thing *growls* can we kill his tormentors pwease. Oooh I have to say I'm looking forward to the next update more than ever. I can't wait, I have to say I love Gypsy, she's ace and I have a OC called Gypsy too how wierd is that, Awww poor Quat he seriously sounded peeved. Anyway back to the point you seriously have to update but AFTER prom. You deserve some you time. Ok have fun and don't do anything Talim wouldnt do *snickers* Ciao x
| Reviewed By: Scarletty-sama On: May 25, 2006 12:24 CDT
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Hey, Hehe lol my doc lives over the road so its all grand my immunity sucks like hell so I get often I just don't believe I'm ill, I get tired but not ill. I have Glandular Fever in stage four whatever that means but I'm alright just bit tired and sore. But yanno what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger ne. ANywho yeah love the chap *grins* Quat's eyein up Tro huh, well well well I can see thats goin to cause trouble, hehe Wufei and Zechs oooh more. No Hee-chan tho *pouts* you need to get round to that. What is Ms Hideki's first name, is it Talims partner ??? Also more I need more, even if my Docs crazy its your fic thats keeping me alive...well up, about and fending for myself. Pwease *pupply dog eyes* please ooh here *gives double scythe* I found it and thought of you, cute huh? So now you can really kick ass! Keep up the work hunni Sayonara x
| Reviewed By: Scarlett-sama On: May 24, 2006 14:53 CDT
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Hey, Heheheh updates and so soon. Arigato Nita-sama. Lol I just had to giggle *smacks playfully* Duo you big flirt. Does Ms Hideki have a first name ??? Lol aww he looks even cuter blushin *hugs*. Lol he can't steal why does this scream pranks for amusesment to me. Beware I tell you beware!. I love Duo's "yeah I broke the window what you gonna do about it" grin its adorable. This reviews a lil short I kno gomen but I'm ill so I've got to get back to bed, my docs going crazy at me *pouts* sayonara Nita-sama x
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 14:31 CDT
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Lucifer: *hands you a stack of paper filled out in neat cursive* Kage-chan said I could join as long as I 'behaved'. ~~Actually I said as long as you didn't ask Duo or Talim to swipe my butterfly knife. *grins and pulls out a shiney-newly polished machete* I found it under Luci-chan's bed. *hands it over* What do you need it for any way?
| Reviewed By: RebelByNature-nli- On: May 23, 2006 16:15 CDT
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I love the fight scene. Nice first introductions huh, and Talim's just a little flirt isn't he? Plus them being unstable definitely makes it fun.
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 14:23 CDT
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I came home from school, and there were three chapters up! It's a great coming home present! Lucifer: *waves* ~~~I like badass Quatre too, it's sexy.^^ Now, I must go read that Preventer's chapter!
| Reviewed By: Scarletty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Hehehe Lol I'm glad you like my speedyness, truth be told its luck, I was online already and as soon as I get an update I drop everything to read it. I love them that much, Yup I recon they'll be fast mates. Lol do you get any feedback that isnt good. SQEE! *glomps Talim* purty baby. Aww poor babes All of them are aching and hurt. Well at least they like each other and somehow I can see future fight sceens. Lol boys all they want to do it fight. I bet Muller is seriously not happy I mean would you be? Oooh I better not ask for more its unfair but after prom can we have more please. I just love it. So are you updating in three's or am I just reading into things. the intoduction of Wufei and Hilde yeah...next Hee-chan. I wonder what side he'll be on... Oooh cannot wait for more, when you have time to do it. Sayonara thanks for updating so quick hun luv ya'z x
| Title: bad ass Quatre
Reviewed By: Scarletty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Ooooh special email ^-^ *glomps* can't wait to read it. My prom was last thurs. *glomps Talim* Yup He's adorable, very cute, I'd take him home with me if I thought you wouldnt mind. If you ever go on holiday send him to me please. ^-^. Your fics wouldn't be the same without Talim. We luv him...but not as much as you *hugs*. Oh Quatre the bad ass Lol I love that... the fight sceen brill I re-read it twice its fantastic, Talim you big flirt, too bad Quatre loves Tro, is it me or does Talim and Qat seem to use this as a chance to make friends and flirt like crazy? Aww sweet, they'll be mates soon I think. Oooh I loved that sceen more than anything else, since I've reviewed quickly can ya put up another chap....pwease *puppy dog eyes* they are becoming adictive. I suppose however we are going to have to lighten up on the requests since its ya prom and all. Oh well never mind. What were they stealing err who was approaching I know your can't answer them but I thought I'd say them anyway. *sighs* I only just read the chap and I'm thirsting for more...look at what you've done to us, we're going mad *grins* but you love havig us in suspense dont you lol *glomps* hope to review soon looking forward to my email and of course I read your bio I figured I'd check it out see your fanart which is brill by the way. Sayonara hunni x
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 17:23 CDT
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And they meet!! Man, Duo was not nice in chapter 2. Usually he's all chipper and everything. You kow what Talim, I bet he's loud too.^^ Now don't pull that innocent crap with me Nita, you know I see through it! Lucifer wanted me to give this to you. *gives you a mini-flamethrower* I have no idea where he had it stashed.
| Title: the perfect score
Reviewed By: Scarletty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, OOoooh more, ooh who's Duo with Quat, proberly Heero, Who Shai, is that Ms Hediki? Oooh Tamil got me cofussled then I was like Tamil? wat I'm sure it' Talim, and it was. Heee, thats not fair you can't leave it there...noo thats not fair, I need more. *tuts* Trowa's sexy...he's just sexy being silent makes him mysterious, No I like this, kinda reminded me on Lena with the clothes but they wernt pink so it's all grand...I like pink 0.0, Anywho yeah please write more, I'm coming addicted to this. I want to kno whats in that room and where the rest of the guys are and following your bio my fave pairing is 1x2 but me adore, simply love Talim! Heylo you too *glomps* I'm in your bio...*gives candy floss* Also I dragged my lil ill ass out of bed just to review your fic, well tha and I was dying for the update. so here's a fairly long review since you like them soo much ^-^ and I'm happy you do. Luv ya sayonara x
| Reviewed By: Rose Fury [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 17:20 CDT
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Tamil? Really now Nita, who do you think you're foolin'? *grins* I'm so glad you're back in the game! *does happy dance*
| Reviewed By: RebelByNature-nli- On: May 17, 2006 16:27 CDT
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2,4,6,8 who do we appreciate? Nita! Retribution is starting out great. I esp. like the bitch part in the beginning. Update soon!
| Reviewed By: Scarletty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 11:13 CDT
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Hey, Oooooh interesting, I would love to read more and check out what happening. Go inspiration run wild and bring back fresh ideas. Oh wait you have. Brill love to hear more. Please x
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