| "Saiyuki Serial: Beautifully Broken Evolution" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 18:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So I now have to wipe up all the drool off of the keyboard, but it was well worth it! Another great, well written chapter of BBE. It comes at a great time for me as I just finished re-reading it yesterday. In between chapters I wonder what new kink you'll come up with for Sanzo and Gojyo to try out and I haven't been disappointed yet! I'm still not sure how this turned into such a great plotline out of all that hot sex, but I'm not complaining. I'd ask for more updates, but then I wouldn't get any new chapters for your other stories and I'm just as hooked on them. (of course, I'm sure Ni and Kou wouldn't mind you playing with them again!)What a great way to end my Monday at work, by coming home to an update from you. Thanks!
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Reviewed By: winter moon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 22:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yay! A new chapter!! Thanks for the update-and of course the last couple of chaps have been great as usual! Though I have to admit, I'm feeling a bit like a stalker, considering this is my third reveiw on this page of reviews.... That being said, I'm not sure that I'm going to survive another month and a half for an update (not that I'm keeping track or anything:) Maybe if I bribed you?? Hmmm....runs off to ponder what kind of bribe it would take to get another chapter soon... Would love to see you update In the Shadows, In the Light as well. I'd leave reviews on everything that I read of yours, but if I'm *already* feeling like a stalker, I can't imagine how I would feel after that. To all who read the reviews to find out if the story is worth reading-this one is! There is excellent character/story development and you won't have any problems with the grammar or spelling issues. Make sure you mind the warnings though:) And to all of you who read this story and love it, make sure you check out Iron Dog's other stories as well! They're all great, and we can only hope that there's more greatness to come!
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Title: Can't wait
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2007 08:16 EDT
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Whenever I'm here, I always reread some of these chapters. Sexy as always. Can't wait for all the romantic partners admitted their feelings. I guess that would be the end of the story. But I hope it weaved thru until they defeat Gyumao. I think you should bring Kougaiji gang into the story. But its YOUR story so do as you like; and I'm sure it'll be superb.
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Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 18:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sex with a Dragon is HOT. You have managed to do it again, made it real and so darn HOT. Who would have imagined that the Dragon/Jeep(?) Hakuryuu and Hakkai would have a secret relationship and that it would be so sizzling HOT. Well Done! as usual you get my immediate attention and I read breathlessly until the end when I can take a deep breathe again. Your writing is so amazing. Trudy aka GreenEyes
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Reviewed By: MewIchigo123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 21:22 EDT
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gah omg i love it! hurry and get the next chapter up! i will love you forever and ever! *gets on knees and begs*
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Reviewed By: Spazzoid [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 01:29 EDT
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I randomly found this fic one day while searching for my favorite pairing (...35 if you couldn't guess) and after reading it I fell in love with them all over again! Please write more soon PS I love the kink!
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Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhh! I just love the realtionship between the the monk and the demon. So sweet, funny and antsy. A wonderful story that adds dimension to the Anime when I watch one of the DVDs I own of Saiyuki. Absolutely love these guys and your stories about them. Great job again.
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Reviewed By: winter moon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 23:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so happy when I received the email saying that you had updated! You're an amazing author and I never cease to be amazed at your talent. The characters are so well written and the story keeps you riveted to the screen-and leaves youy wanting more! I definitely didn't see this one coming-though I love that it was about Goku:) That being said, I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter! Until then, I guess that I'll have to go through the stories on your website...again.... Update soon!! :)
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Title: 'Saiyuki Serial: Beautifully Broken Evolution'.Chapter 23 gift of the magpie
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 04:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stuff is so good, so well written and easy to read. A gift to all of us. Keep up the good work, love stories about these guys expecially when they are smexy, lovely stories of love and angst. GreeyEyes
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Reviewed By: Xo Shu Mhing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 13:51 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I just read through all 22 chapters and I have to say, well.. Wow. I love the way you write these boys! Great Stuff indead!
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Reviewed By: winter moon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 14:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great way to start off the new year!!! I love your story and can't wait to see what happens next-maybe something with Hakkai and Hakuryuu?? Guess I'll just have to wait and see... I know someone else has already asked, but-I was wondering abiut the seahorse also...hmmm...maybe that'll be in the next chap too...
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Title: Running imagination
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 02:46 EST
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U know, when the two hotties making out on the chair my mind was going. "The chair going to break, the chair going to break..." :-D Lovely, as always... I have two questions now which I know u're going to explain in coming fics "Why a seahorse & what did Sanzo said when he was sick?" Update soon! I'm on the Loveboat...Hoot! Hoot!
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Title: Sexy HOT and tender
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 16:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How do you continue to do it? You are so in touch with these characters that they just leap off the page into a sexy reality. Just got acquainted with these charachers via the DVDs and fell in love with them, then I find this and WOW!your writing is amazing as usual. Can't wait for more. Great story! Thank You, Trudy aka GreenEyes from Kira's site
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Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 01:01 EST
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How come you write so good?
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 17:11 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was a very tender chapter, in my opinion. I loved how caring Gojyo was, and how confused yet accepting Sanzo was. I could almost picture that wall around Sanzo crumbling with each gentle gesture on Gojyo's part. Well done!
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