| "Saiyuki Serial: Beautifully Broken Evolution" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: dark1alucard [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2011 20:11 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story. theres so few saiyuki ones and even rarer to have good ones. please keep it up. |
Title: SQUEEEEEEEE!
Reviewed By: IceniQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2010 14:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SQUEEEEEEEE!!!! A new chapter!! (yeah, yeah, I know you posted it in July, but real life's been a bitch lately ....) I ADORE this fic, and (frankly) everything you write. Please, please, please keep writing!
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Title: Chapter 32 The End of Days
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2010 03:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your stories. They capture the essence of the characters perfectly and are so amusing. They have me laughing out loud almost every chapter. Well written and never a false note. This story is a gem
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Reviewed By: Xo Shu Mhing [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2010 00:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Funny as all heck!
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Title: Not Ending Soon, Is It?!
Reviewed By: MirSanTF [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2009 09:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope this latest chapter isn't the final for this WONDERFUL smut. The various kink I read about blew me away; I love how hot each chapter is, and the creative ways you get Gojyo & Sanzo together. The character development in this story is one of the best I've come across (hehe) - and this latest chapter left me feeling so many contridictory emotions. From giddy to aroused to nervous to all kinds of tingly... but it also left me with a feeling of "fuck, the shit's gonna hit the fan!" I've read the whole story about three times now, and each time I fall just a bit more in love with it. I'd hate for it to end now, but I understand how fickle muses can be. Just know that you've got yet one more reader on the edge of her seat! The drool's kinda embarrassing, though...
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Title: Wowzah
Reviewed By: BakaChoco [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2009 06:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all. PLEASE keep updating! You do a great job with the character POV and manners of speech. Also, what a fast read. You manage to progress the story while making it too hot for it's own good. (Which I'm thankful for.)I have really enjoyed the progression of Sanzo in this story, though I appreciate Hakkai's story just as much. Thank you for writing this, I really hope we can see the end since it's obvious there are many followers. It's not just a hot fic since there is so much character development, that's just a major plus of it. You are a great writer! Keep going!
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Title: Chapter 32
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2009 04:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Big Sigh!I just love this story and the relationship between all the different characters. Wonderful fanfic. Trudy aka tutyfrty
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Reviewed By: Midnights_Amaya [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2008 01:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the new chapter...Hakuryuu and Hakkai are becoming one of my fav pairs...i cant wait 4 Hakuryuu to make Hakkai beg like he did during "hard" play!! update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Midnights_Amaya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2008 16:57 EDT
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Yes finally a new chapter...that bath house sex was soooooo hott. Plz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Soapland sexy sanzo
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 09:04 EDT
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I loved it when you raise & lower the mood of the story. Hot sex & then one bucket of water! Ouch! & you managed to slip some sexy Hakkai story & how he managed to 'warm' up Hakuryu. Might be Hakuryu warming him up instead. Truly yummy!
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Title: 29 Soapland Sonzo
Reviewed By: AngelmyAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 00:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! you keep on doing it. The love between each of these two couples is beautiful. So moving and of course hot, this is one of the best stories I've ever read. There are only a few writers I read who move me like you do, or write as well. thank you for your amazing stories (not just this one though it is my favorite). Tutyfrty aka GreenEyes
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Title: Ch. 28
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 17:50 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I totally wanted to leave more reviews as I read, but I just couldn't stop. This story gets better and better. The sex is topped only by the wonderful emotions. I love Hakkai's unexpected love with Harykuu, and Goku and his lovely secret friend. And Sanzo agonizing over his feelings, while Gojyo gets more and more comfortable with his own. Delicious! Hope you update soon! Please don't leave us hanging too long!
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Title: JOY!!!!!
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 14:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG! I had a sudden craving to revisit this story, but didn't know what title you were using. Found Ch. 1-16 on another site and just finished reading them. With title in hand I came back here and what should I find but a wealth of new chapters!!!!!!! This is, hands down, still my favorite fanfic of all time, any fandom. You are an erotic genius. Thanks for many, many happy hours, and more to cum, er, uh come.
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Reviewed By: gingersnapkitty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 23:22 EST
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You are the biggest perv ever and I love it! This story actually gave my extremely homophobic guy friend a hard on. I applaud your writing abilities and your knowlodge of kink. It is very impressive if I do say so myself. I hope that you will update this story soon. I am dieing to know if Sanzo will love Gojyo back. Please do not make me beg! Bye Bye.
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Reviewed By: gingersnapkitty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 23:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are the biggest perv ever and to me that is fucking awesome. Your story actually gave my homophobic straight guy frirnd a hard on. i applaud you for this story. I absolutely love it. Please update so. I am dieing to know how Sanzo reacts to Gojyo's love. Bye Bye.
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