| "Saiyuki Serial: Beautifully Broken Evolution" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 10:58 EST
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Oh, wow. That was wonderful! Warm and steamy! I'm really enjoying the development between Hakkai and Hakuryuu and the glimpses into their lives in Heaven. I'm curious too see how this relationship evolves and affects the others. Hope the next chapter isn't too far off!
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Title: Ai...
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 23:59 EST
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This is soooo mushy. I love it... And yes, I quite agree how you potray Hakkai. He is brilliant. I can't imagine him having a 'duh' moment. Your story seems to me like part of the originals. All the characters in character. I love ... I love ... I love!
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Reviewed By: winter moon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 17:04 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Great story!! I love how you use different POVs to tell it. Well, there's nothing that I can write that hasn't been written before...so I'll just stand in line with all the others as I plead for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_drooler [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it. I can't wait 'till the next chapter. I have always loved SanzoXGojyo. There's the murderous priest and a heated red-headed playboy. And they're sexy as hell together. And Sanzo knows if the Carpets matches the drapes. I just love this whole kinky side to them. It's damn out hilarious at times. But you're doing a great job and I hope you know that I'm dying to read the next chapter...
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2006 11:29 EDT
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That's just simply beautiful. Not your usual 'very hot kinky stuff' but I find this piece are extra special. Though Sanzo are normally 'skittish' but you manage to pull out a character from him that are rare yet believable him. And amazingly you 'display' it by Gojyo's POV when most would find it easier to potray 'inner character' by using their or the character's POV. More soon, please!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 01:26 EDT
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*sigh* I really love this chapter. There's been quite a bit of development since the beginning of the arc, but I think this clearly illustrates the level of progress. Beautiful! (and a wonderful birthday present to me, because that's what I've decided it is!) Thank you!!
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Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2006 00:14 EDT
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aaah, its so sweet...
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Title: Fabulous!
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2006 10:10 EDT
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When I re-read this story. (Yep...all the chapters)I realised that you've drawn a very mature character of Gojyo. I'm not really sure why I called that mature but I guess the way he looked into the relationship and how he deal with Sanzo.And all the character stays in focus and not OOC. Glad you put Hakuryu into the story. Make Hakkai seem less lonely. Anyway, is Goku going to get some?
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 15:27 EDT
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Wonderful, wonderful! I wish I had something more articulate to offer, but my brain is goo. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 14:10 EDT
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What a sweet chapter! Poor Sanzo, being forced to get in touch with himself! Gojyo is so good for him! Can't wait to see the "make-up" sex! *w*
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Reviewed By: gretel_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 21:53 EDT
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Amazing again. What I really like about this chapter is the things Sanzo is willing to admit to himself, and the things he is not. The way you describe his inner monologue dancing around his feelings is excrutiating and exquisite. It made me want him to say some of these things out loud to Gojyo, even though it would never happen. The vulnerability and emotional knots that both men are tied in were quite evident in this chapter, and elegantly portrayed. Lovely lovely work.
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Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 23:26 EDT
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Oh wow! I'm so glad I found this. I'd read it before but lost it, glad to have stumbles across it again. This is the first Hakai x Gojun pairring I've seen. I like it! But I love how you've written Sanzo x Gojyo. How you update soon!!
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Title: Gojun is Hakuryu!
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 10:03 EDT
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Wee!!!! Thanks for the pic that prove beyond doubt that Kazuya sensei states the sexy blue haired dragon is in fact Hakuryu! Ahhh!!! I'm so happy! Yes please! More of Hakkai/Hakuryu!
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Title: Goujun?
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 03:24 EDT
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Is Hakuryu really Goujun? A few writer had mention this but I never read about it in Gaiden. But it would make sense if he's really Goujun. Love your story as always. Little horn on the head? Aww...that was so cute.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 11:46 EDT
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I'll admit it, I was...concerned upon reading the A/N, but I LOVED it! What an excellent chapter and a brilliant idea! I'd love to see more of them in the future!
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