| "Saiyuki Serial: Beautifully Broken Evolution" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: bluesnake40 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2006 03:53 EDT
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Yah, another chapt ... chap 16 was amazing! The plot has really thicken and I loved how you wrote the whole scene so beautifully even though 1 of them could not speak (well aloud anyway). Can wait to read more.
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Title: Glad not over yet
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2006 11:18 EDT
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Forgiven for the 'Complete' boo boo. Me too. Was disappointed when I thought a good story was left hanging. Thank God for new updates! :D Keep this hot story going.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 01:26 EDT
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Another wonderful chapter! So glad to see the boys working toward a resolution! Sanzo's message was beautiful and I'm looking forward to more between Sanzo and Gojyo!
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 23:11 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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The morning after chapter was fantastic! The origami butterfly was a nice touch too. It shows what a walking contrast Sanzo is, almost like he's multiple people with that volatile personality. And yay for showing Goku is not a stupid character like he is sometimes portrayed in other works. Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 23:47 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That chapter was hot! Involving Hakkai, even if Sanzo was a bit jealous and there was a "competition" of sorts, was icing on the cake! I hope there's going to be more, but if not at least this last chapter was a feel good way to finish with a bang, given Hakkai's loneliness as well (I'm still an avid Gojyo/Sanzo fan primarily though lol). Good job as usual!
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Title: Completed?
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 08:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Look like a writers block to me. I saw under Type it is completed. So there won't be any update? Anyway loved your story. Wished the story could be longer. Looking forward to your other fics under saiyuki.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 11:56 EDT
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Wow! What an emotionally charged chapter! I LOVE how the lemon so clearly reflected the dynamics between the characters. The interactions are painful in their honesty, but SO worth it! Can't wait for the "morning after" chapter!
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2006 22:25 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh yay!! Update!! I very much enjoy this story..hell I very much enjoy all your stories lol. But, this one is fantastic. I'm so looking forward to the big blowup between the four of them :^D
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Reviewed By: june [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 01:11 EDT
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The wait is knawing at my soul. Yes, I know. Patience pays. *Wait wait*
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 21:51 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I was thrilled beyond belief to see an update! Yay! Even if it's retelling what happened from Gojyo's pov, it's still captivating seeing it as the kappa saw it. I hope Sanzo figures things out and does the right thing so the two of them can actually have something special. Looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: gretel_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 21:12 EDT
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I just love this series. I read it on the Saiyuki Yaoi LJ, and wait with anticipation for each new section. This chapter is a stunning counterpoint to the previous. There is nothing repetitive about the retelling from Goyjo's perspective, and gives me hope for something to continue between these two. They are so damaged, and you write their flaws and good points so well. I look forward to the next.
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Reviewed By: Edah1011 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 11:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn...I Love your story. You are a pervert anyway. Hehehe... Please continue the story. Love it so much...Muaaahhhhzzzzz.....
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2006 02:31 EDT
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NO!!!!!!! I know that Gojyo has it in him to win Sanzo over! It's cruel what he did, but Sanzo's suffering in his own way. Can't wait for the next steaming, exciting, and emotional installment!
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Title: You are an absolute pervert!
Reviewed By: jedaqia [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 05:55 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an absolute pervert. I've printed your story and been reading it in bed going nyaa nyaa ***. All the demon in my head going *kawaii*!!! Just when I thought the story sizzled down a bit you throw in the best cliffhanger and I'm hanging at my computer waiting for the next chapter. A bright eye drooling neko. Going nyaa nyaa nyaa ... How cruel of you to make me wait ...
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 15:08 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first started reading this on aff before they started having never-ending problems and am so glad to see it here with chapters I hadn't read yet. What a wonderful way to spend my day!! It is such an exciting, erotic story (as many of your fics are). Gojyo/Sanzo is my favorite pairing in this fandom and it's very hard to find fics with them paired, especially with Sanzo playing bottom at all which is what I prefer. This last chapter was moving, sad. I am anxious to see where you take the relationship or resolve it between them. Sanzo's battle with himself, causing him to hurt Gojyo as he did - very angst-fest. Yum. He's so screwed up it's heartbreaking. Good job and looking forward to the next chapter which I hope is very soon in coming.
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