| "All I Need" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jay On: August 08, 2003 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how the eff do you use "too complex words"? You must not be too literate. It's called enhance you vocabulary and read more. It's good for you. |
Reviewed By: oxygene_iv [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fic but only that... i mean is great but there are two bad things about it, one, you use too complex words... and two more than a year has passed since your last update... |
Reviewed By: FaeMiyu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go on/Great scence on Poke'mon |
Reviewed By: ILoveSesshomaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was actually rather interesting to read. You described things with such detail and actually turned what some people would write as insanely disgusting gibberish, into an art. I aplaude you and your writing. |
Reviewed By: Dragonee On: July 23, 2003 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
While on the main Mediaminer fan fic page, I was looking at the "most visited" section, and decided to look at the fic. I read the warning and was curious to see what the reviews said. After laughing my ass off about these stupid statements of "you use too many big words", my curiosity poked me in the eye and so I decided to read the fic.
I love your detailed descriptions, and even though the ten year old Ash wouldn't know this kind of flowery language, you'd never know what an older Ashy would be capable of.
I'm not a big Ash/Misty fan, but the writing style was a big difference from the usual crap you see on many sites. *cough cough*
Yes, the originality was slim to nil, but you were trying a lemon from a different perspective, and I think that's cool. Keep writing and don't let the flames bring you down. |
Reviewed By: An idiot On: July 18, 2003 22:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
If you have Japanese words in there you should also have the Japanese names for Ash and Misty as well. Ash is Satoshi and Misty is Kasumi. It was interesting to say the least. |
Reviewed By: Amber Myst On: July 18, 2003 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it's not your fault everyone's just too stupid to understand what you you wrote, and for everybody else who think Ash and Misty are too young then please read the author's note in the beginning where it clearly states that Ash and Misty are old enough to have sex. Some people are just unbelieveable with the reviews they leave. I'm a hard-core aaml fan and I think this was great! I just loved your writing style and the way you blended the words together. |
Reviewed By: Kurama-Is-MINE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 18:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok. Firstly, I would like to say this is sick and wrong. 10-year-olds...and then of course there's the matter that...yeah...this is just...WRONG. And...half the time I couldn't understand WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON! I am agreeing with Godzilla...it took me a very long time to figure out what those words meant...you know what? Never mind, fuck it. |
Reviewed By: Jay On: July 18, 2003 21:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
That really makes me want to find my own love. You're an awesome writer. And people that don't understand it must not read much. I understood it completely, and it was written in a great way. I just wish you'd update |
Reviewed By: An idiot On: July 18, 2003 22:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Now that you've ended it in the middle, you should pick it up right off where you left it. |
Reviewed By: Demetz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 11:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, its just funny to me that every once in a while an author comes along that truly upsets the balance between the plethora of vocab-lacking readers and the less than excellent works they are reading. Don't tone it down at all, it is a work far superior to much of what I've read here and those who have trouble reading "big words" can use a dictionary. The only thing that I think should be changed was the line about pikachu, it takes more away than it gives to the story. |
Reviewed By: PrincessZelda On: May 19, 2003 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was sweet, but I could never imagine Ash and Misty doing .....it.... |
Reviewed By: YamiNeko On: April 23, 2003 19:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
ok, so maybe you use a lot of biiig words, but i liked it! i just think you should change it to a third person perspective, cuz I don't think Ash is that smart. Brock, on the other hand... heheh, i love brock! |
Reviewed By: oxygene_iv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is great!!! too bad you dont want to write it anymore, its been a year since the last chapter!!!! |
Reviewed By: Taslan On: January 27, 2003 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant belive this one but your the second person to recive a perfect rating from me
*Claps* Good job keep writing |
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