| "Are You Steady Now?" Reviews/Comments [ 55 ] |
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 23:30 CDT
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Shoot, I just realized I wrote spoilers. Hrm... Can you delete reviews?
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Reviewed By: deunank [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 23:29 CDT
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what a satisfying chapter. So well done! It really explained it well and I found the presence of Crawford at Yohji's hospital room fascinating. Sorry, too sleepy to leave a coherent review so will have to do it when I reread the chapter. I loved it, in any case. Yohji and the pants were funny!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2006 20:45 CDT
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Wow! Chapter 5 is spectacular! I love that we're able to feel the frustration of both Ran and Yohji; it's very intense for the reader! I hope that Yohji is able to come to a resolution soon (and, of course, that he ends up with Ran!). I'm looking forward to the next installment. Your writing is absolutely riveting and I found myself on the edge of my seat more than once!
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Reviewed By: kurokuro On: September 01, 2006 00:13 CDT
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Ummmm, more please?? I just read the first four chapters tonight and I definitely hope this will be continued :)
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Reviewed By: me On: August 21, 2006 22:17 CDT
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i neeed an update! and i have to second Mikko - i hope Ran is the uke . hope to see more soon!!!
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2006 04:31 CDT
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ooo. cliffhanger! i really like this story. a lot a lot. man! getting to the good parts and you leave it like that!? you know thats mean right? it's an excelent story. i like how you're not just making it all happen at once. that it's happening at a relativly normal pace. and that you connected stuff, like the car, tattoo and scars. update! X3
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Reviewed By: Miss Macabre [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2006 00:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Woooooooow! I had this fic on alert, but never had the time to read it at once- I'm glad I stayed home today! Awesome fic! I can't wait for the next chapter- so update soon.
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Title: wow!
Reviewed By: Mikko On: August 12, 2006 18:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll give you a nine, cuz I don't know who'll be the uke, but I'm hoping that Ran is the uke XD I have fallen in love with this story, update plz?
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: August 11, 2006 08:27 CDT
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aarrghh! Things were just getting good...and now they are going to be all vex with each other...and i'm torn because yohji should know, but if they're mad that means no sex. ugh
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Reviewed By: LilyMoonsAlias [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 08:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent and emotionally charged chapter, but, ouch, what a cliffhanger. I hope you don't leave us in suspense for too long before the next update. Great work!
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Reviewed By: red queen On: August 11, 2006 01:45 CDT
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gah...you wanted to forget everything, ya stupid fuck! and hey, look, your lover DID come to find you, after all! be happy, you moron! argh...i can tell i'm going to want to smack yohji around a bit...i can understand why he'd feel a bit betrayed, but hopefully aya will be able to explain it to him...aya's not the greatest wordsmith though. at least he should know now that takatori is a big fat liar too...no! don't run off with asuka in a paroxysm of pique! stand by your man, dammit! *sniffle* i know you have no qualms about writing a story with an extremely non-happy ending, so i'm feeling all emotional...aya's necklace is so...AWWWWW!!!-inducing. he was probably secretly hoping yohji would get a glimpse of it sometime, the sneaky li'l hottie. c'mon, yohji, hurry up and remember what a jerk you were! *grinds teeth* man...post-gluhen stories...
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2006 00:24 CDT
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GAH!!! So close and now...? Riveting chapter! I love it! I REALLY hope everythomg works out for our boys! But, I trust you, so I'm not freaking out too much! VERY much looking forward to the next installment!
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Reviewed By: glinwulf On: August 11, 2006 00:03 CDT
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This is just getting better. Don't wait so long to post again!
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Reviewed By: RanKudou On: August 10, 2006 22:56 CDT
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MORE...PLEEEEEEEAAAAAASEEEEEEEEEEEEE...T.T *crazyyyyy* I'm lovin it, really, it's just perfect...and i'm hating omi right now...lol...you're a very talented writer and your Ran is just perfect. I'm in love with this fic, really. Marry me? *lol*
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Title: oh my gawd!
Reviewed By: me On: August 10, 2006 22:39 CDT
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this is like the best fic ever! seriously! the drama! i am loving this to death! i can't wait for another update -just when i thought it couldn't get any better.... :) you are awesome, keep up the good work!
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