| "Third Time's the Charm" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: KK On: August 09, 2006 10:55 CDT
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Hey whats up, Im really excited for chapter 13, I cant wait till you update Im so excited! Anyways I hope you update soon cuz this story tottally rox!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2006 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I knew they can't stay away from each other and I'm glad he gotten every thing out between them. Hope you update soon and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: xSimplicity (nsi) On: August 03, 2006 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kawaii!! they made up ^^ that's so sweet awe update soon!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 13:22 CDT
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I'm so happy they're back together! And they better stay that way, lol! Great chapter. Hey, when's Miroku gonna come into the story? If he does, I hope it's soon. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: cath On: August 01, 2006 11:32 CDT
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yay!! they'Re back together!! i still can't really...accept the fact that inu and sango used to sleep together...anyway!! awesome chap so i'm begging u!! update soooon!!
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Reviewed By: doujo (dlg) On: August 01, 2006 10:56 CDT
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ah! We were all waiting for that moment ^^ They finally got back together... But I bet Kikyou will try to do the couple breaker! Well, still, I really want to read more! Hope you'll update really soon ^^ *as usual!*
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Title: chap.12
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2006 03:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... that was sweet! Any they're together again! NICE! Cheers... update soon plz! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: KK On: August 01, 2006 01:03 CDT
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Keep updating and do it fast!
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Reviewed By: rainydays (nsi) On: August 01, 2006 00:22 CDT
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Awww... I am glad they are together again!! :o) It's so sweet! I hope things will be okay with Sango and Kagome. Anyways, great job! i can't wait to see what happens next!! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: BB On: August 01, 2006 00:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! i just want to say that i like your story. I want to say something but it's not a flame. As i said, i like your story, but i find the "bad previous relationships" theme a little ovehyped, if you know what i mean. i personally would have liked it if you had down-played the whole inu slept w/ san thing. but either way, i still liked the chappies. sorry about the 7 in o/c. its nothing personal.
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Title: chap.11
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2006 07:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHH! Now that she knows.. gah, things are gna be a lot harder...
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Reviewed By: xSimplicity (nsi) On: July 29, 2006 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story i like it a lot =) update soon i look forward to it ^^
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Reviewed By: KK On: July 29, 2006 10:19 CDT
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As sad and heartbreaking as that chapter was, I think chp 11 was your best so far, but make sure you get rid ok Kikyo (Im a Kinky-ho hater, sorry if your not), Oh and make sure you get Sango and Kagome friends and again and have Inu and kag make up and when is Sango and miroku gonna start dating? When is Miroku gonna come into the picture? Anyways I love the story and I want you to go back to your updating like everyday cuz I loved that, your so awsome anyways keep update/writing! Love always your biggest fan
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2006 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, why did that bitch have to come and ruin it all! And they where gitting close too. Well hope you update soon and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: whorl On: July 28, 2006 14:32 CDT
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I understand why Kagome left. After seeing your new guy's ex who is almost identical to you, and hearing that he and his best friend used to have sex, just really can be too much for some people especially when it is suddenly thrust upon you. And is it just me or does Sango want to be with Inuyasha?
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