| "Third Time's the Charm" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: doujo (dlg) On: July 20, 2006 00:07 CDT
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yay! I already read the 7th chapter =) (but it's quite late atm...) very nice chapter... inu yasha/kagome's first 'date'! Update soon again ;) ... Ah, now a disadvantage to read that chapter so soon... i'll have to wait longer for the 8th chapter =/
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Reviewed By: doujo (dlg) On: July 19, 2006 20:19 CDT
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nice!! =3 they finally had a formal meeting... Hope you'll update soon, can't wait to see how their hanging will turn out ;)
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE
Reviewed By: KK On: July 19, 2006 14:30 CDT
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Please update it was awsome (your such a good writer, Im so jealous) you have this way with the display of the characters,its so good, SO PLEASE UPDATE and thank you so much for writing this ( I cant wait fo chapter seven) Love KK
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Title: chap.6
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 07:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a sweet chap! Sighs... they finally talked to each other. I mean, actually talk alright... not only stare. Laughs...
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Title: chap.5
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 07:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww.. dis s a kinda fluffy chap. It unfold some of Inu's past w/c s gud. I jus hope.. really really hope! That ... PLZ, can u make d chaps longer? Hehe... -.-;;; I'm sorry if I bother u. T-T
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Title: On with the show
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 01:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story sounds like it's going to rock. I can see Kagome and Inu's relationship predicament I've been there myself. It's going to be real intresting to see how their meddling friends are going to get them together. Great story, update soon, bye.
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Reviewed By: Doujo (dlg) On: July 18, 2006 20:45 CDT
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wow!Great chap! =) I'm happy to know some of their past relationship as well. I can't wait for the next chapter... I hope it's the chapter where Inu Yasha and Kagome will finally talk to each other =D
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Title: OMK! (oh my kami)
Reviewed By: Kiki33 On: July 18, 2006 19:55 CDT
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OMK,OMK,OMK!!! This is sooo great. I love your story! Plz update soon. You Rock, Kiki33
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 10:32 CDT
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great chapter! i can't wait for more! update soon!
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Reviewed By: rainydays (nsi) On: July 18, 2006 00:56 CDT
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yay for updates! I am glad you explained the past history of relationships. I'm excited they are both going to give each other a chance... I hope everything works out! :o) I can't wait to read more. Great Job!
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Title: chap.4
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's a gr8 chap. It explains most of the past n now we know why Kag is scared to be in another relationship. Sighs... let's just hope that Inuyasha will help her reconsider. Smirks.
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 20:57 CDT
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I like this story so far. Really, it's a good start! But I must agree with the others about the length of your chapters. It's a little short... But anyway, it doesn't mean your story isn't good. I hope you'll update very soon ^.~
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 15:46 CDT
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soooo good so far, looking forward to the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 10:59 CDT
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awsome story. i just love it! i especially love the comment keade made. keep up the good work and update soon!
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Title: chap.3
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Update soon plz! I'm dying here... it's soo cozy how everything connects. And plz make d other chapters longer k? Haha, I like it better when it's long. Gr8 job on dis one. ... ... .. .. UPDATE!!
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