| "Third Time's the Charm" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Title: OMK! (oh my kami)
Reviewed By: Kiki33 On: July 18, 2006 19:55 CDT
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OMK,OMK,OMK!!! This is sooo great. I love your story! Plz update soon. You Rock, Kiki33
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 10:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
great chapter! i can't wait for more! update soon!
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Reviewed By: rainydays (nsi) On: July 18, 2006 00:56 CDT
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yay for updates! I am glad you explained the past history of relationships. I'm excited they are both going to give each other a chance... I hope everything works out! :o) I can't wait to read more. Great Job!
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Title: chap.4
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2006 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's a gr8 chap. It explains most of the past n now we know why Kag is scared to be in another relationship. Sighs... let's just hope that Inuyasha will help her reconsider. Smirks.
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Reviewed By: Doujo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 20:57 CDT
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I like this story so far. Really, it's a good start! But I must agree with the others about the length of your chapters. It's a little short... But anyway, it doesn't mean your story isn't good. I hope you'll update very soon ^.~
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Reviewed By: DragongirlCV [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 15:46 CDT
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soooo good so far, looking forward to the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 10:59 CDT
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awsome story. i just love it! i especially love the comment keade made. keep up the good work and update soon!
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Title: chap.3
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Update soon plz! I'm dying here... it's soo cozy how everything connects. And plz make d other chapters longer k? Haha, I like it better when it's long. Gr8 job on dis one. ... ... .. .. UPDATE!!
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Title: chap.2
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 00:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a gr8 idea how deyr thoughts match up. CuTe, I must say!! Hehe... I hope dey'll meet @ d bar since both of 'em needed a drink. Smirks...
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Title: chap.1
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha! That was a gud first chap. I hav a wild guess dat 'dat' girl was Kagome eh? Laughs... this s interesting.
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2006 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story please update soon.
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Title: kool!!
Reviewed By: Jalen On: July 16, 2006 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really awesome!!....keep up tha good work and update asap ^_^
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Reviewed By: rainydays [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 22:11 CDT
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Weird that Sango was with Inu... I just can't picture it! I hope she finds Miroku soon! hah.. Anyways, I hope you update soon. I think you have a good start to this story! Good Job!
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Reviewed By: InuYoshi Higurashi On: July 16, 2006 18:00 CDT
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It is a pretty good start. However i think it was too short try making the following chapters longer. Other then that very good job keep it up.
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Title: On with the Show
Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2006 02:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say I'm not to thrilled that Sango fu**ed Inu but hey that's what spices up an Inu/Kag fic. I'm very intrested in how the story is going to evolve, so please update soon.
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