| "Third Time's the Charm" Reviews/Comments [ 82 ] |
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 13:37 CDT
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I can't beleive you brought in Kikyo! You're evil! (just kidding) I hope Kagome doesn't want to not see Inuyasha anymore because of this. Because that would be stupid on her part. Anyway, great chapter! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: rainydays (nsi) On: July 28, 2006 03:36 CDT
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I HATE kikyo... UGH! I wonder if you will bring Kouga into the picture too.. hehe. That would make Inuyasha SO jealous. Anyways, I wonder how Kagome will recover from Sango/Inu news and the whole Kikyo ordeal. Great chapter!! I am eager to keep reading! I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: cath On: July 27, 2006 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
do u know how much i CAN't wait for the next chapter to come up?? well i'll tell you...I CAN'T WAIT AT ALLLLL!!! it was fuking aweomse so please...i'm begging u!!! update ASAP!!
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Reviewed By: doujo (dlg) On: July 27, 2006 21:44 CDT
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ack... i knew she'd come back! >.< oh well, anyway. Usually I don't hate Kikyo, I guess I'll have to on this fic =P well, update soon... and make Kagome fully understands the situation... I think she always jumps too quickly to conclusions -rolls eyes- lol update soon! =)
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: KK On: July 27, 2006 10:34 CDT
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Hi, I want you to update please update, Im dieing here for you to udate, please, please, please updat Im on my knees, just please update Love always your biggest fan
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Reviewed By: KK On: July 25, 2006 21:47 CDT
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Please update, Im dying for you to update, ooo please update, I beg of you Love always your biggest fan!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What is she going to do with him? SCREW him dammit, hahahaha. But for real this story is cool and I'm glad that you captured the animalistic lust and attraction that people feel towards each other even if they just met each other. Can't wait to see where the story goes, I know you're lemon is going to be the s**t.
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Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting fic. The only thing I didn't like about the plot so far was that Inuyasha and Sango had a past sexual relationship. :P I'm not a fan of that coupling which is probably why I was turned off by it, even though it only happened in the past and was a colossal mistake, lol. Them sharing a bed was also sort of weird, lol. Anyways, other than that I like how the plot is going so far. I do think that we need to see more of what Inuyasha is thinking. For some reason I feel that Kagome's thoughts are more thorough and explicit. Sure, Inuyasha is a man of few words, but not in his mind he doesn't have to be. ^^ I definitely think that in your next chapter we should see what Inuyasha was thinking in that little make out session at Kagome's apartment. More description also couldn't hurt in general. I also noticed how you clearly state how Kagome reacts to Inuyasha's touch but never how Inuyasha reacts to Kagome's touch. Overall I found the story very creative. I only had a couple of questions though. Is everyone purely human? If not, does Inuyasha have puppy ears or claws? Any special powers? Just wanted to clarify and I hope you write many more chapters and keep up the good work! ;)
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Reviewed By: Suikidoen On: July 24, 2006 18:29 CDT
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YAY! you must write more!!!!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 11:05 CDT
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I really like this chapter! i can't wait for the next one! please update soon!
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Reviewed By: KK On: July 24, 2006 09:59 CDT
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That was so cute I loved it! So are they gonna go on another date or are they gonna become official? And if they become official are they gonna start hanging out alotso Kagome doesnt have too wait all the time(lol)?OOOOO I cant wait til next chap, Im too excited!Anyways update soon! thanks, your number one fan!
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Title: chap.10
Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 09:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah!!! That was like... so soon but it fits the story flow. Uberly HOT! Me like it... Grins.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2006 04:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story hope you update soon. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: rainydays (nsi) On: July 24, 2006 03:40 CDT
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Thanks for the update! Good chapter... I wonder if Inu is going to start being himself around Kagome. I can't wait for another update!! :o)
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Reviewed By: geurin On: July 23, 2006 22:08 CDT
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PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!! i loved it so far but you really should continue it i hope you plan to do just that>.
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