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Reviewed By: Verloren On: January 19, 2007 02:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Just WOW. I found this for the first time the other day, and after a few chapters I was completely hooked! You have an amazing way of writing that totally sucked me in. Sometimes I thought you were literally trying to kill your readers with the angst (and I mean that in the best way possible)... but it was so, so good. And yes, you're right, the characters are a little OOC- but I don't think it's outrageously so and it fits in with the story perfectly. It makes me believe that Hikaru would actually wear fishnet shirts with nothing underneath, or that Waya would be a homophobe. I think my favorite thing about this, though, is the phone messages the characters leave each other. The funny ones from Waya, and the completely heartbreaking messages Hikaru left on Akira's phone in particular. Sorry, I'm rambling and a little incoherant at the moment (sleep deprivation will do that to a person, I guess). My point is that this is incredibly written and I can't wait for more. *hugs*
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Reviewed By: bb On: January 14, 2007 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Sorry it took a while to review. I've been reading too many blind go fics at live journal and I still couldn't guess anything... U_U However I am happy that things are finally cleared up with Hikaru and Akira. *^_^* Right now my only concern is Kota's obsession with Hikaru. Please I beg of you: no more angst. My heat can't take it. LOL! Thanks for the update. I really enjoyed reading this chapter. *^_^*
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Title: sunshine
Reviewed By: shihiru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2007 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Cooooool chapter!!! Akira is going to be seme? Wow, That is so cute >_< GO! GO! Akira!!!
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Reviewed By: MewMew2 the original On: January 13, 2007 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your welcome. Anyways, I'll try to update when I can but I'm kinda over stressed, because I just found out that my boyfriend is going be shipped out in July. The worst part is I have a trip to france that I have go on, and I think that the time that I'm there and when he leaves might overlap. Very bad and just......bad for lack of a better civil term. Yeah, I'll review again if I'm in the mood.....
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Title: raindrops
Reviewed By: shihiru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 00:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yes!! You finally update. But, wait a minute... Hikaru and Kota have a sex?! HAVE A SEX?! OMG!!!
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Reviewed By: jou-kaiba-mokie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 22:13 CST
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omg that was great so much drama cramped in 2 chapters! genius!update soon
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Reviewed By: bb On: January 04, 2007 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Snifs* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.... ch. 28 >_<
Okay maybe I've been reading too many Hikaru/Akira one and only fics where they are each other's first and their love it's so strong and pure... It's impossible for Kota to love Hikaru the way Akira loves him. OK! I'll stop ranting! Thanks for the update. Hope you had a great new year and a wonderful holiday season! ^_^
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Reviewed By: MewMew2 On: January 03, 2007 22:41 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you SSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Much for updating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know how hard it is to find time to do things like this on the side. NEways, I sympathize with you but, 'We all have our burdens to carry. I have mine, and the load ain't light!' I just made that up on the spot or I heard the first part somewhere and added onto it. Oh well. I give you encouragemnet to continue and insentive to update. I hope that you find some relief from your stress both daily and non. Ja
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Reviewed By: Devious Lil Devil On: January 01, 2007 13:37 CST
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and Happy New Year to you, too! we're all eager for your next update and look foward to seeing it whenever you get the chance to put it up. i cant wait for hikaru to give in to akira's advances.
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Reviewed By: jou-kaiba-mokie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 19:20 CST
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great chapter! I love it:D:D:D:D and u posted on ma birthday 2! no wonder I couldnt review fast enugh!:P nyway it is heating up:D cant wait>
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Title: honeybear
Reviewed By: shihiru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uaaah...It's really nice to read that Akira & Hikaru can together like that; with Waya & Isumi also.
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Reviewed By: bb On: December 15, 2006 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Sighs in relief* Finally a chapter that didn't leave me feeling apprehensive! Now all I have to do is wait for them to get together... I'm almost certain that I can handle two weeks of waiting for an update and hopefully it will be worth it. BTW, great chapter. I love the UST between those two. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Devious Lil Devil On: December 15, 2006 14:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*spanks Hikaru* no! damnit, no! wrong person! sorry kota, no offense, but hikaru belongs to akira. i love the way waya spelled it out for hikaru: "what does he have to do? rip your clothes off?" LOL. poor baby. if only he waited a little bit longer. oh well, i look forward to more evil looks between kota and akira. see ya next time! ^__^
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Title: shihiru
Reviewed By: shihiru [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 01:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hikaru with Kota o_0?! Noooooo!!!
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: jou-kaiba-mokie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 23:23 CST
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OMG cant wait for the next chappie:D but Im sure it'll probably be here sometime next weekend or so...nyway...I love this cHPTWR :L
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