| "Flowers in the Sand" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 10:26 CST
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You did fine with the fight scene. Don't worry too much. If I had been there when Gaara got hurt I would have spazzed and carried him back myself (even though I'm so damn tiny).
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 10:12 CST
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OOOOHHH!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 09:40 CST
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Wow...
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 09:22 CST
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SHE'S BLIND!!!!????
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 06:26 CST
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SWEET! TIS AWESOME!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 13:07 CST
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Poor girl. I feel for her. I love the story.
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 12:54 CST
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AWWW! *hugs Gaara* He's so lovable! *Gaara twitches* GREAT CHAPTER!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 12:42 CST
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OOOH! O.O Can't wait to see what happens! Poor Naru. Being teased. Never fun.
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 07:30 CST
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Love the story! And I've only read the first chapter!
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Title: Flowers in the Sand
Reviewed By: Twilight Garden On: December 23, 2006 18:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good story and the reason that I read was because the drawings for this story intrigued me into reading it. You had me going there believing that Sasuke was the bad guy and it was good even though he was not a bad guy. It made me want to smack Neji and Gaara for being so slow and not realizing that Tenten and Safaia were in love with them. I really liked the fact that it had a happy ending of sorts. I hope to read the sequel as well. This story was just great I really liked it alot.
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Title: I AM BACKKKKKK!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: nejiten4ever!! On: November 14, 2006 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am back and i am sorry for not reviewing in such a long time but i had 'issues' with my computer and stuff. sigghhhh. Anyways i wanted to say that it was a good ending but i wanted to see was what going on with everybody else? what happened during the last couple years? don't leave us hanging! we want to know!! maybe you could write a short story telling what happed? but anyways i am looking forward to the sequel and/or the short story (if you write it) and again i am so sad to see this story end!!!!:( Ja ne!!!! XD
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Reviewed By: Wandering Soul1014 On: October 26, 2006 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm looking foward to the sequal.
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Reviewed By: InuWolfie On: October 24, 2006 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although I loved your story, I happen to agree with LdyVegeta610 about the childrens' ages. At the time Akina was 4, Teiru was 3, Chouichi was almost 1 year, and Kohaku was born. In the epilogue, I'm assuming that Akina is about 11 or 12, Teiru is 10 or 11, and Chouichi is 7 or 8, which would make Kohaku about 6 or 7. And I believe that Shikazu, Mimi, Inoko, and Haishen would be the same age as Haru, give or take a few months. Other than that, the transition of the story was excellent. I did not get bored one bit while reading it (I liken it to reading the DaVinci Code-once I was so into it, I couldn't take my eyes off of it and stop reading!) Also, I was wondering if you were going to draw the other character couples: Neji, TenTen, and Haishen; Gaara, Safaia, Haru, and Aikou; Chouji, Ino, Chouichi, and Inoko; and the addition of Mimi to the Inuzuka drawing. (What ever came of the child of Kankuro and Niira?) Last but not least, are you going to elaborate more on Gaara's and Safaia's wedding night, aka the smex scene? =X Sorry, I have a hentai mind at times, but it's what makes some stories interesting. =) Sorry I'm ranting but when a story is as good as yours, I can't help but pay attention to detail. Hope this helps your critique, and I look forward to a sequel.
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 05:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME!!!!! really REALLY enjoyed that pls make a sequel
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Reviewed By: LdyVegeta610 On: October 07, 2006 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story! However, I was perplexed by the age of the children. Maybe I missed it somewhere in the story, but you mentioned in the Epilogue that Chouichi was the same age as Akina and Teiru. If I remember from a previous chapter, he was mentioned as being 7 months old, when Akina and Teiru were 4 and 3, respectively.
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