| "Given The Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 487 ] |
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 19:23 EST
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i just cant wait till the lemon like geeezzzzzzzzzzz gaara is so sweet like hes awsome i really cant see why ppl cant see beyond the demon i love him in seris fanfics anything hes just #1 they need to accept it
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 19:21 EST
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ohhhhhhhhh he's really really hot he's really really hot
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 19:20 EST
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omg Lingerie i cant belive it lol but who knows she will look hot in um i guess well if i was a guy i would say that ( awkward silence) thats what gaara's bro said anyway..............lol am just hyper cant help ma self
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 19:18 EST
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i loved it it was awsome and ohhhh i like the song moonlight sontana its cool and wait wait thats not the best thing UR GONNA WRITE THE LEMON YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 3 CHEERS FOR THE SEX whoooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 19:16 EST
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yesssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2007 16:00 EST
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As always, spectacular. I'm loving the fact that Fujita is gay and that Garra once again wants to kill Kankuro. You got some pretty good stuff in this chapter. I'm really confused though cause apparently you posted this chapter two days ago and I'm pretty sure I've checked at least twice since then before now, and it didn't show an update. Stupid computer or internet or whatever else is screwing me out of new chapters as soon as possible. But anyways, I can't wait for the next update. Happy writing and good luck with your exams (I just finished mine today).
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 20:28 EST
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i really like this chap. awesome job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 14:39 EST
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I live in the North too. But I've never really been a fan of snow. Maybe it has to do with getting an snow ball in the face every winter...? They are the cutest thing ever and I'm happy and sad at the same time when I read this. Happy cause I love those two characters together and its completely believable. Sad because my BF is in the Army and I miss him like crazy when I read your story. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 13:05 EST
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Me: I hate snow days. Too cold. Hate exams. Too hard. Gaara: You hate everything. Me: Not you. Anyway... I can't wait to see Kankuro get his ass. kicked. Pervert. Yet so am I. That is how I have aquired the nickname Hentai. No I'm not a guy (just in case you were wondering) I am a 15 (16 on March 20) year old girl. A perverted 15 year old girl.
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Reviewed By: Mizz_Sandman [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 02:46 EST
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WTF?!?!?!?! it says I wrote that comment on January 16!!!! DID NOT IT WAS THE 15 I SWEAR! ( oooh I get it. Time difference... *feels stupid*)
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Reviewed By: Mizz_Sandman [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 02:43 EST
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*lifts exams off your shoulders* that help? lol. and JUST SO YOU KNOW POOKA, I don't ALWAYS take two friggen days to read the chapter. *evil* I just... take my time! and... just because Im not on here every friggen day!....*is calm*...Notice the date of this review *same date as chapter came out* PWN........ nevermind... hehehehe LOL LINGERE!!! love it. love it. LOVE IT!!! *shudders at the thought of what Gaara will do to his brother* lemon? Lemon? LEMON?!?!?!?!?!?! *dies* I don't think Gaaras a phsyco (wtf i cant spell that) either. *joins the million fangirl march* YAY! *waves banners* You live in the north? coooool... I have only seen snow twice... neither of which were where I live.... GAARA *wtf randomness* ummm... ANYWAY! I love the picture! so kawaii. Cassie really did come out well, I've been waiting to see a picture of what the author describes her as and she is EXACTLY what I imagined... Gaara........... nothing else needs to be said... Gaara owns us all... >_> hmm... maybe I should talk about *thinks* pie... nevermind... *tries to think of another topic to talk about*.... *fails* well I guess thats all. BAI BAI! P.S.... GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR RRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAA... HOWS THAT POOKA?!?!?!?!?! ...pwn...
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Title: Hiei81
Reviewed By: Hiei81 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 23:18 EST
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Finally!!! Lemon! hehehe i can't wait to see how you do with Gaara in that perdicament.
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Title: fooo!
Reviewed By: hinataxnarutoLuvr On: January 15, 2007 23:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv this soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooo much!!!
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Title: OMG!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: SupersexyPooka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 20:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LIKE OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG. That was so AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!...hehehe Kankuro got Cassie-chan langeray (i know i spelled it wrong) that word is impossible to spell. Gaara's gunna kill him^^... well i cant wait for the next chapter, hope u update as soon as possible!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!! OH and im truly honored that u mentiond me again, and im sure Mizz Sandman is to!!!! well ok p.s. Gaara is a smexy beast and him and Cassie-chan make the best couple ever (you'll notice im tryin to rite alot so ya) OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG...i need to tell Mizz Sandman that they added a new chappie or else she'll figure it out in like 2 freakin days but i check it every day so...............ya well...ok then i think ive written enough so bai bai...but i want to write alot more i want this to be the longest comment ever writen so....i know what i'll do i'll spell Gaara's name really long GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.................yeps there u go *twitch twitch* ok then now i'll say goodbye BAI BAI!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: xXdonutsXx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 19:20 EST
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OMGOMGOMG!!!LEMON!!! LEMON!!! LEMON PIE!!!!! *Donuts does incredibly awkward LEMON dance* cant wait!
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