| "Through the Furnace, Unshrinking" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Title: Oh wow.
Reviewed By: c00kiemon On: March 10, 2008 19:41 CDT
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I remember reading the first chapter to this fic a few years back and never going further and fuck it, do I regret that decision. The plot and the characterization was totally awesome. Heck, I'll even give props to how you wrote some of the OCs before they were offed. They were cruel, ruthless, and most of all, human. Though there were some spelling errors I'm really glad I stumbled upon this fic again; it's well-written and has my favorite OT3.
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Reviewed By: DynaD On: September 13, 2007 23:26 CDT
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Perfect! Thank you for sharing this thrilling story with us. I looked forward to and thoroughly enjoyed each chapter. You have a great gift of storytelling.
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Reviewed By: Suzee On: September 13, 2007 11:13 CDT
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Lovely, lovely. I love it all.
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Reviewed By: MW On: September 04, 2007 23:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just Brilliant. The Characterisations were perfect, keeping them in line even with the different circumstances and they fit. You story was amazing, the depth of plot and detail and the changing POV's which changed in style to suit the POV, great! I have not enjoyed/been engrossed in a story, any story much less a fanfiction that was so gritty, honest and yet uplifting in a very long time. Thankyou very much for writing this story, it was a great plesure to read.
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Reviewed By: DynaD On: August 23, 2007 01:06 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a wonderful story. Thank you for writing and sharing it with us. I hope to see you produce more fics of this caliber.
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Title: MeLaiya
Reviewed By: MeLaiya [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2007 22:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this. Ive been following it from the very beginning but seriously. When are we gonna get a 3some scene hm? Oh Ive sooooo been waiting for that. But anyhoo, love your style and thought out chapters ya know, very shway. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: signseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 07:19 CDT
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Brilliant, as always. I'm really sad to this story end, but I like how you're doing it. This was my favourite line: "Quatre had materialized like a phantom, a will o' the wisp, only visible by his bright hair. He was just as dangerous as those ghostly lights that led careless travelers to their deaths in treacherous swamps and forests. " Beautiful imagery. Thanks for sharing your writing!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 04:24 CDT
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THE BIG FAT KILL IS DONE!!!! ALL HAIL THE WORLD< THE BITCH IS DEAD! WE SHAT, UPON HER HEAD!! WE TURNED GAEL"S BODY INTO AN EFFIGY, WE BURNED IT IN HIS LOOOBBY, AND WE KILLED KILLED KILLED KILLED, AND WE KILLED KILLED KILLED KILLED KILLED, OH WE DID GO AND KILL< KILL KILL!!! HALLILUEA! Okay, the bastards are dead, everyone is okay (relatively speaking) and the bastards names have all been taken, and shot down. COOL! I look forward to the next chapter, and some conclusions. Hey, some good to happen to the G-boys would be cool, ya know.
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: April 19, 2007 19:13 CDT
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Glad I read your warning to re-read the last chapter or I'd have been really lost. It does make more sense that Heero and Wufei would take action to rescue Duo instead of merely trusting the police. And what a place to stop! Geeze, that was very cruel of you, you know. Great action and pace. I'm looking forward to the next installment
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Reviewed By: signseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 22:31 CDT
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I've been waiting for an update :) Wow, this was seriously tense! I'm actually glad Quatre didn't leave- I like that revision. And I like that he's going to be hunting Gael. That definitely feels right to me. Poor Trowa, though. I'm excited to see what comes next.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Br On: March 23, 2007 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Heh, well, I have enjoyed reading this story and think it's well written. But, I have to say it seems a bit far fetched now. It's way over the top in the action department. *laughs as I visualize the scenes in my head* I have to wonder if you're a Quentin Terrintino fanatic. :^D Anyways, looking forward to seeing what happens next - perhaps Wufei standing alone in a room with only his sword surrounded by 100 or more ninjas.
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Reviewed By: signseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 22:27 CDT
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Gah! TROWA!!! My heart is in my throat here! Please let my boy be okay *puppy eyes*. Great chapter- so much exciting stuff going on! I love Trowa POV. It's my favourite POV in this story. And Quatre was wonderful, as usual. The ending was fantastic: very tense, very real. I also loved the emotion from the threesome. I think it's difficult to write a believable three-way relationship, but you're definitely making it work. Keep up the amazing work! (But really- only a few more parts? That makes me so sad!)
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 16:57 CDT
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dear gods you must write another chapter soon or I shall fair to burstin' die!
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: March 11, 2007 11:59 CDT
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Excellent chapter, story and writing. I'm really caught up in this drama and can only hope that by some miracle Duo will survive to see his friends and lovers obliterate their employer.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 11:58 CDT
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*grins like the Cheshire cat* Well, this story just gets better and better, and even harder to read. *sigh* I love this story, but I do want to see a happy ending at the end of this, hopefully soon, the story seems on the verge of climax. Heh, climax. Anyway, love the story, looking forward to updates. Later.
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