| "Through the Furnace, Unshrinking" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: signseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2007 07:19 CDT
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Brilliant, as always. I'm really sad to this story end, but I like how you're doing it. This was my favourite line: "Quatre had materialized like a phantom, a will o' the wisp, only visible by his bright hair. He was just as dangerous as those ghostly lights that led careless travelers to their deaths in treacherous swamps and forests. " Beautiful imagery. Thanks for sharing your writing!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 04:24 CDT
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THE BIG FAT KILL IS DONE!!!! ALL HAIL THE WORLD< THE BITCH IS DEAD! WE SHAT, UPON HER HEAD!! WE TURNED GAEL"S BODY INTO AN EFFIGY, WE BURNED IT IN HIS LOOOBBY, AND WE KILLED KILLED KILLED KILLED, AND WE KILLED KILLED KILLED KILLED KILLED, OH WE DID GO AND KILL< KILL KILL!!! HALLILUEA! Okay, the bastards are dead, everyone is okay (relatively speaking) and the bastards names have all been taken, and shot down. COOL! I look forward to the next chapter, and some conclusions. Hey, some good to happen to the G-boys would be cool, ya know.
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: April 19, 2007 19:13 CDT
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Glad I read your warning to re-read the last chapter or I'd have been really lost. It does make more sense that Heero and Wufei would take action to rescue Duo instead of merely trusting the police. And what a place to stop! Geeze, that was very cruel of you, you know. Great action and pace. I'm looking forward to the next installment
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Reviewed By: signseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 22:31 CDT
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I've been waiting for an update :) Wow, this was seriously tense! I'm actually glad Quatre didn't leave- I like that revision. And I like that he's going to be hunting Gael. That definitely feels right to me. Poor Trowa, though. I'm excited to see what comes next.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Br On: March 23, 2007 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Heh, well, I have enjoyed reading this story and think it's well written. But, I have to say it seems a bit far fetched now. It's way over the top in the action department. *laughs as I visualize the scenes in my head* I have to wonder if you're a Quentin Terrintino fanatic. :^D Anyways, looking forward to seeing what happens next - perhaps Wufei standing alone in a room with only his sword surrounded by 100 or more ninjas.
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Reviewed By: signseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 22:27 CDT
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Gah! TROWA!!! My heart is in my throat here! Please let my boy be okay *puppy eyes*. Great chapter- so much exciting stuff going on! I love Trowa POV. It's my favourite POV in this story. And Quatre was wonderful, as usual. The ending was fantastic: very tense, very real. I also loved the emotion from the threesome. I think it's difficult to write a believable three-way relationship, but you're definitely making it work. Keep up the amazing work! (But really- only a few more parts? That makes me so sad!)
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 16:57 CDT
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dear gods you must write another chapter soon or I shall fair to burstin' die!
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: March 11, 2007 11:59 CDT
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Excellent chapter, story and writing. I'm really caught up in this drama and can only hope that by some miracle Duo will survive to see his friends and lovers obliterate their employer.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 11:58 CDT
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*grins like the Cheshire cat* Well, this story just gets better and better, and even harder to read. *sigh* I love this story, but I do want to see a happy ending at the end of this, hopefully soon, the story seems on the verge of climax. Heh, climax. Anyway, love the story, looking forward to updates. Later.
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Title: through the furnace, unshrinking
Reviewed By: anissa [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 00:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! You can literally feel the tension in this chapter! Everything seems to be coming to a head this point and I really don't know who will be coming out of this mess alive or if any of their relationsips will be the same again. I know that Trowa feels that he has to protect Quatre at all costs, but when does this cycle end? You would think that in the situation that they were in that they would have stuck together, but instead it looks as though Gael did succeed in dividing them. Now, even if Heero and Wufei manage to get to Duo I wonder if Duo will come out of this alive or not. I know one thing I am tired of Duo being the one to get all the suffering from Gael and being his tool for punishment because Gael hates Duo so much because he wants Heero and he knows that Duo is the main reason why he can't ever have Duo. I often have wondered in this story why they didn't all just leave that city behind and just go some place else instead of putting up with Gael and all of the other shit that they have, but that is not for me to decide. Overall, this story has been a hell of a ride from start to finish with each chapter making me want to know what is going to happen next! Thanks so much for writing it and I am looking foward to reading the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: signseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 23:46 CST
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Ah! The tension! That's quite the cliffhanger. Nice work paralleling the series, by the way: I love Trowa's chameleon ability. What's going to happen?? You can't leave me hanging...
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Reviewed By: signseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 23:09 CST
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Oh. Oh...I think you broke me. I mean, I'm happy Trowa and Quatre are finally together, but it was so desperate, so bittersweet. I think you did a really wonderful job with the tone of this chapter: the tension was palpable. I loved the scenes with Quatre and Olean (she was a pretty great character...so much depth in so little time), and the way you ordered them was neat. You are a brilliant writer.
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Reviewed By: signseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 15:34 CST
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Oh! Update! I seriously could not love this story more. I'm very glad those three have finally got their relationship settled: definitely my favourite threesome pairing. As always, your writing draws me right in, and I really like how you can make the story emotional without having it get sappy. I'm looking forward to seeing Trowa and Quatre again...next chapter?
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Reviewed By: signseeker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 19:21 CST
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Another intriguing chapter...I really like this story! As of now, Quatre is my favourite character. I like reading stories where he's just as tough as the rest of the boys, and I'm certainly getting that he is...but without losing that spark of compassion that makes him Quatre. I'm also really enjoying Wu Fei's characterization, which is odd for me, since he's not one of my favourite characters. Can't wait to see what's going to happen next!
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Reviewed By: dami On: January 27, 2007 01:19 CST
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Sometimes the dark beauty of your writing makes something inside of me ache.
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