| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2002 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did great! Again I have to say! Puh-leeze hurry up and finish this fic! |
Reviewed By: Vampiric_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2002 16:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
It takes me longer and longer to scroll up and down these revieuws... this must be a record of some kind! I think Bulma should win! ChiChi really doenst deserve it and Videl deserves Gohan!
Now.. My celibacy is getting kinda irritating as I have meat a very very very cute guy.. Please finish soon okay? ( or ill have to agree with one of the other revieuwers and hunt you down) |
Reviewed By: Vegetas Gyal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2002 16:06 CDT
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Well, so now that Bulma's plan has backfired I wonder what she'll do. It's lucky for Chi-Chi though. ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter! Please, please PLEASE update soon! |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: June 14, 2002 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
@_@! You know...everytime I read a chapter it just makes me want to read the next one even more!!! *sigh* And now I have to wait! *pouts* anyways! As always an unbelievably great chapter!
May your muse visit you many times!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Nesha On: June 14, 2002 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That story was so COOL!!! I'm glad to be reading a lemon fanfic that deals with lack of sex. See... *blushes from embarrassment* I've, too been suffering from lack of sex. 4 LONG MONTHS OF NO D*CK!!! Anyways... when my fave lemon author of all time, Gokusgirl voted this story as fanfic of the week, I KNEW there was a reason for it! Keep up the good work! ;) Also I want to join your mailing list. My E-mail address is: nesha219@hotmail.com I hope you finish this story SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: Queen Noriko On: June 14, 2002 13:24 CDT
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Poor Poor Poor Videl! Bulma should learn to be more specific!!! Keep writing, I hate "To Be Continued"'s |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 14, 2002 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no, the glass broke. I can't wait to see what will happen as a result of this. As always, another good chap. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: June 14, 2002 11:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um, I posted more than that! It didn't get it all! (wails) Anyways, I'll have to stick to saying great awesome totally cool really bodacious cowabunga (why in thw world am I speaking Turtle-ise?) chapter here.
BTW, 'bussal' is bustle. For some odd reason, it make me think of brussel sprouts..... |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2002 09:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! What will happen now that the REAL glass of wine with the x is gone???? Please hurry and update before I piss my pants!! :) |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails On: June 14, 2002 06:12 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me + Review = where is the next chapter? |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 14, 2002 07:52 CDT
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majorly cool! i wonder what juliet has planned for trunks? and oh no! i hope the right mrs. son gets the drugged glass, not videl! |
Reviewed By: Gundam Gemini Maxwell On: June 10, 2002 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINISH THE FIC OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN!!!! ~.^ jk! love the fic! keep it up! write more often!!!! peace |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2002 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ohhh, Bulma is such a little devil! Getting rid of competition. But I don't believe she has purely pure (this is the time I need a thesaurus) motives. She's Vegeta's mate for Pete's Sake! She won't simply concede when the whole pot is within arm's reach. Divide and conquer.... Vegeta would be proud...if he wasn't so angry and deprived.... WAHHH! I say, since Bulma's trying to cheat, she should get her own medicine; pun intended. Let her be the sex-driven berserker jumping Vegeta in a room full of people. I'm sure he won't mind. ^_^
You're going to let Videl win aren't you? Or none of them. Videl's the one we least expect and none is just devious enough to satisfy everyone.... What? They all get the pill? (gg) None of the guy's will mind. Or maybe somebody like Yajirobe will get it. (EEK! Scary thought! But then again, paybacks for the whole tail thing, huh?) Anyways, let me know what happens by updating.... I'll wait. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 09, 2002 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooh, bulma is twisted! i knew she was vaguely evil, but holy jeez! the boys should retaliate! yay! |
Reviewed By: Queen Noriko On: June 09, 2002 00:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE ... |
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