| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] |
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Reviewed By: Psyfire [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 15:50 CDT
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LOL.. sometimes having the mentality of a 12 year old, is a GOOD thing. WOOHOO GOKU! You know, you'd think Vegeta would want Bulma to win.. Then again, he might just think it was a way to prove that Bulma couldn't resist him, making him better then Gohan and Goku *heh* either way it's fun to read *heheh* |
Reviewed By: And1 On: July 17, 2002 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
These past few fanfics are rather addicting and are often enjoyable to read. This last chapter while suspenceful was for lack of a better word boring. Not to ofend your work but the suspence that kept people reading is missing. I'm not the most qualified person in the world to be making these types of statements but good luck with the next. |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 13:27 CDT
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Aww, the guys feel so betrayed! Well I hope those two will get some soon! Update soon okay?
p.s. Is it just me or when I get an update notification about this fic I get like 10,000 emials??? :) |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: July 17, 2002 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"You had sex Kakkarot!" ^_^ I thought that was hillarious! ^_^ Just the mental picture was enough to make me laugh! Really good fic! Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: MajinMe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 11:15 CDT
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YOU are REVIEW-HAPPY!!!!208?!?!?!?!AND YOU WANT MORE!?!?!?!?!?! Fine, fine, fine. ANYTHING to keep JB happy . . . *sigh* Hee hee, at elast there's a REASOn for you 208 *ahem* 209 reviews! Your sotry is as FANTASTIC as EVER! And hurry up with that 14th chapter . . . |
Reviewed By: Sam On: July 17, 2002 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your fic. Last time I forgot to review(sorry ^^v).Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Lynn On: July 17, 2002 11:04 CDT
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This is great. I hope the next chapter is a B/V. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: autumn On: July 17, 2002 09:36 CDT
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Oh, I forgot about the guys' little plan. They're just jealous. hee hee.
I would love to see Bulma win only to get rejected in the end. It would serve her right. Then again… that would mean no B/V chapter… decisions, decisions… (glad I’m not the author)
Great stuff as always :) |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 05:28 CDT
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It's not Goku's fault! Well, it kinda is, oh well!This was great! I wish there were more, who's going to win!? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 17, 2002 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! So now it's just betweem Bulma and Videl...I wonder who will come out the winner. |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2002 23:32 CDT
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haha! great new chapter. poor Goku, well not really... ^_^ Hurry with the next chapter please. |
Reviewed By: buffy On: July 15, 2002 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
shimatta onna!! ur good. geez.. im here all glued 2 my chair w/out getting my eyes off of the screen cuz this story has got me bad. i luv this fic. i can honestly say that this is my favorite but FAVORITE fic ever!! u really have 2 update! i've been waiting 4 about a month 4 ur next ch.! and still its not here!! *cries* dozo update!! dont keep ur loyal fans waiting!! :OP |
Reviewed By: Sk8nBaBe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2002 19:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Need to what happends plz make another chapter! |
Reviewed By: hi!! On: July 12, 2002 23:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
hahaha i love this fic.its soo funny how u turned the tables on the girls.hahaha it is very funny.please update the next chapter really soon!i know a lot of ppl enjot this fic. |
Reviewed By: CatEyes920 On: July 11, 2002 14:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the most hilarious story that I have ever read. I can't wait 'til the next chapter is out.
You are so evil! I have alot of DBZ fanfic, (centered around Vegeta/Bulma), and none tortures any of the characters as well as you did in this story so far.
Kudos ^_~
CatEyes920
P.S
Don't forget toUPDATE |
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