| "Willpower" Reviews/Comments [ 304 ] |
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Reviewed By: RainbowSugarHeart02 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2002 22:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
I CAN NOT WAIT to see what happens to Goku and Chi Chi. Next to Videl I was positive, Chi Chi would crack. I just don't think Bulma would. It's too obvious. Anyway. Hurry and write the next chp.!
Lauren |
Reviewed By: trunks' girl On: May 15, 2002 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's so freakin funny, oh my gosh i fell of my chair laughing!! b/c r gonna die |
Reviewed By: a fallen angel in blue (FAB) [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2002 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey cool ficcie!!!!!!!!!!, continue pleaseeeeeee!!!!!! and let videl have some, she's still young, and let Chichi too, I know Bulma will win the bet, she has more will power than chichi and videl together, and I know, even When Veggie is sexually depressed and is a walking sack of hormones, I know he will be proud of his mate. |
Reviewed By: EvilGotenks [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2002 11:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fanfic!!!!!!! I like the whole celibacy thing, but come on, Bulma resisting an extremly sex craved Vegeta? Right! I'll believe that when Vegeta grows a moustache!!!!!! Great Story though. Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Naughty Puppy On: May 13, 2002 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so excellent, i loved it but don't go thinking i'm a pervert cause i'm not. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2002 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey man keep it going i want to know how Vegeta gets to Bulma |
Reviewed By: silverdragon On: May 13, 2002 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOO! Geez, I kinda feel bad for Videl now. :( More! I really want to see what Vegeta's going to do! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing On: May 13, 2002 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ah, I say let Videl and Gohan have some. The girl is obviously too weak to handle it.... -_^
Now, the Vegeta/Bulma scene should be nice. Let's see if Vegeta has more willpower than Gohan shall we. Heck, everyone always beats Vegeta in everything. Heck with Bulma, let Vegeta win!!! lol
O_o, yes, you're review...it was interesting. >_ |
Reviewed By: mooncatz [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2002 04:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
so, are you going to wright more? |
Reviewed By: masume On: May 12, 2002 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great! and so cute,as always! keep it up. good laughs to be had in this, for sure!! |
Reviewed By: Brie-chan! (MSP) On: May 12, 2002 22:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Pretty Please, for the love of Vegetasei's god! Continue!!!!!!!!!! What torture will Goku bring to Chi Chi, what suffering will Bulma go through from the hands of Vegeta? *rips out hair* Dammit I must know!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 12, 2002 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dammit, that finger licking part drove me up the wall. I feel really bad for both of them but specially Videl cause she got all caught up in this bet. Tell you what, do them both a favor and let them finish what was started in the kitchen. Then write that chap on B/V. They've waited this long, a little longer won't kill them (although by now I'm sure Veggie wants to blow up the earth). Great story ^_^ |
Reviewed By: priss On: May 12, 2002 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE THE WAY YOU UPDATE SO.................QUICKLY;) please please continue? OH AND BY THE WAY THE CHAPTER WAS GREAT! |
Reviewed By: ErieDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2002 21:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Oh. Man.. I'm so sorry Videl.. *sobs right along with her* Man, that sucks! B/V scene.. *eyes turn into gigantic saucers*
Keep it up! Don't let that whiny little Videl chase you out of it XD Lol. Keep it up!!! |
Reviewed By: Callie On: May 12, 2002 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it!! I can't wait to read more, especially what happens to Bulma and Vegeta, and, oka, Chichi and Goku *grins* Well keep up the good work and update soon!!
~Callie |
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