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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 On: December 06, 2006 14:09 CST
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I really like your story bt I was wondering when will you ever update the story it kinda seem since your last update and now yo could have atleast 4 or 5 chapters up already but o what do you have writers block or you just don`t want to update it oh well I guess I won`t see this story updated anytime soon to bad it is a really good story
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2006 14:50 CST
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I love the story and I can`t wait to see what happens but come on and update the story already oh well time to find other stories to read
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 13:12 CST
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The story is good but man please update the story
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Title: InuyashaNaruto
Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
personal I dont think he should take her back, but then it wouldnt be true to the character so he should but not blindly or wholly either she should work to earn his trust and not just be accepted its more poiunant that way! please dont put Kakashi and Aya together it wouldnt be right!It would be a BIG betrayal to naruto!
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Reviewed By: Hybrid_FireLightning Creature [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 17:13 CST
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You bastard! How dare you make the cliffhanger!? --Sobs-- Love the story...
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Reviewed By: leeslotus On: November 13, 2006 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude... this is pure perfection if it had amonkey other then that it is a great story and i feel really bad for aza and naruto seems a little ooc
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Reviewed By: ShadowBlade539 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 12:17 CST
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I think Naruto should remain stubborn and leave without giving Aza an answer, but the day he dose decide to give her an answer Orochimaru should attack making Aza worry if she would ever see her son again or find out if he accepts her or not.
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Title: ....
Reviewed By: UwillNeverKnow On: November 13, 2006 06:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
why should aza expect her and naruto to be like best friends Happy dappy..She Left HIm...alone thinking she was dead...He probly would of felt better thinking she dead and had no choice in leaving him..BUT she HAD and choice and left because of the one thing everybody else hated for..THATS JUST COLD!!!!!!!!!!! p.s U TAAKING TO LONG TO UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..lol
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 05:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:11 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!! P.S.Plz have him accept her!!
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 11:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent, as always, and the chapter was longer too! Aza needs to learn that one should be judged for what they choose, not what they are. Yondaime chose to give his lfe for the village, and even though this is what is expected of a Kage, she can still hate him for leaving her a widowed mother. Just as Aza chose to leave. No one forced her. She made a choice and followed through with it, fighting every ounce common sense and fully conscious of how selfish she was being. She rightfully earned the ire of those she abandoned. Naruto, on the other hand, never had a choice in anything. He was left motherless, fatherless, penniless, hated, and viciously persecuted by the entire village for twelve years, and nobody even had the decency to tell him why. Yet he still chose to quit crying about it and better his situation.
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Title: Not insane
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 07:46 CST
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To me I don't Aza as insane. Noone can handle that kind of heartache and expect to live their life normally. If the story (in my opinion) went something like where when it's the 1 year anniversary of Kyuubi's attack, Aza could've killed Naruto while he was still a child!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 05:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:10 Plz Update It Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: leeslotus On: November 10, 2006 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude this story is amazing please update as soon as possible
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 17:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Bittersweet. You obviously put great care into your writing and it shows. It's mildly astounding that someone so weak of heart that she couldn't look upon the face of her own child bore someone of such strength and resiliency like Naruto.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 06:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love The Chapter:9 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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