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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 10:59 CDT
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Man . . . that is just not right!! You like doing evil cliffys!! Oh well, I'm just sitting on the edge of my seat that's all . . . I'll be patient and wait for the next chapter to come out!! Great job! Update soon, please!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 05:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:6 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: ShadowBlade539 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 12:10 CDT
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This is great you better continue or I'll kill you
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really really love this story I just cann`t wait to read more Ijust hope you update this really good story soon
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 22:18 CDT
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That was a good chapter it kinda sucks that Naruto fell asleep during his mother`s story oh well Sakura will probably tell him later I just Naruto will accept her so they can be a family ok update soon and this time no cliffhangers lol wel keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: Hybrid_FireLightning Creature [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 21:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Must...update...soon...plz? I really like your stories. Ive kept this in my favs and bookmarks since the beginning.
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:5 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: toratsume(not logged in) On: October 19, 2006 18:51 CDT
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ahhhh-!!!!!!!!!!!!that was done purposely!!!!!!!!!! OMG, evil, evil, evil, cliffy!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait until you update!!!! I was so getting into the reading too. I was like, omg, omg, OMG, OMG, OMG, . . . NOOOOO, not a freaking cliffy, anything but that!!!! But, there it was, a evil cliffy . . . great chapter, you have me on the edge of my seat, so please update when you can!! toratsume
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story so she has been traveling alot since leaving when will she realize Naruto is there and how will she act heck how will he act when he finds out she is his mother will she move in with him or is she going to try and take him away from there please update soon I got to know what happens next so please update soon and keep up the great with
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 17:46 CDT
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OMG!! What is going to happen next now!! My mind is buzzing, and I am getting hyped up! Naruto is there, Aza is there . . . Aza is a gypsy, so that means she's been traveling for some time perhaps . . . AHHH, what is going to happen now!! >hyperventalating, and can't spell< Oi, please update soon!!! So intresting and I have to know what is going to happen after this! What is going to happen! I can't stop asking that . . . gees how pathetic am I. >sighs< Great chapter! I hope that you update soon! toratsume
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 17:42 CDT
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I love The Chapter:4 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love The Story Plz Plz Update It Soon1!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this story it was sad to read thats Naruto mom left him ok well will you have her explain where she went to what she had been doing is she alone or does she have anymore kids and why she came back after all these years and what will Naruto do or say ok well Please update soon please and maybe make the chapter alittle longer ok well keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 11:03 CDT
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>blushes furiously< You are so kind!!! I'm excited! I want to know what is going to happen next!! I like the little conversation that team 7 had. Well at least Sakura and Naruto . . . Sasuke, well that is what is expected of him. Very nice, I can't wait until your next chapter. toratsume
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 16:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like how this story is going. I hope that you update soon. Really sad, but it can be understandable with Aza's reasons for leaving, being that I have felt that way at times too . . . only I can't run away. I'm putting this on my fav's!
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