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Reviewed By: toratsume(not logged in) On: November 08, 2006 01:00 CST
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That was a beautiful chapter. i like that saying too. So very true. I can't wait to read on how things are going to go from this point. Keep up the great work! Love the story, toratsume
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 07:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:8 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: Ryugenkotsu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahaha you called Hybrid a she. liked your fic by the way. keep going and don't make the same mistake I did by making my most popular fic a continuous or you may choose to do so, your choice.
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Reviewed By: Hybrid_FireLightning Creature [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
newest chapter...eh, not he best but hey it's still really good. Pls update soon...
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Title: Wishes
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 17:54 CST
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Well just about everyone had a thing or to come true in these past few chapters but that alone is good. I personally like the scene where everyone gathers because I too have been in the same boat as Naruto. I think you have something going on here so keep on writing and I'll keep on reviewing.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 09:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your writing style; it's quite polished and mature. I just wish the chapters were a bit longer.
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2006 01:39 CST
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KAWAII!! at the end. really good chapter! And the fluff! Love the fluff!! Now, we can only wait to see what happens next, or in this case, read. Update when you can, don't feel pressured. I know school can really dampening one's writings. Keep up the good work! toratsume
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 20:59 CST
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Great story so far but come one and update already I thought we were suppose to see alot more updates oh well please update soon and leave out the cliffhangers please
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Reviewed By: redsnake15 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 09:46 CST
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update already!!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 18:58 CST
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I love the story but those chiffhangers not so much PLEASE UPDATE soon
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 20:44 CST
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I like it so far. Keep it going. I don't know why you've listed it as 'completed'.
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Reviewed By: toratsume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 13:13 CST
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Ya know what . . . your getting a little to comfortable with these evil cliffys that ya are doing!! Lol, anyway, great chapter. Naruto, the thick headed numb skull, lol, only he wouldn't be able to place the peices together . . . which makes the lovable blond, everso more loveable!! i can't wait until you update again! toratsume
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 09:48 CST
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I love the story and I love all the chapters but please make the next chapter alittle longer it just seems to me that each chapter is really short anyways keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2006 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:7 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 12:31 CDT
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I love the story and I cann`t wait till you update again oh well guess I will have to wait for the next great chapter to be put up so keep up the great work
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