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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 23:47 CDT
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I have so been looking forward to this update I am glad your taking in the direction you have it makes it that much more interesting! I eagerly await the next chapter as well as the rest of this story!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 01:33 CDT
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Well I was going to ask you again to update but I am not going to bother since I e-mailed you once before and wondered when you were going to update and that was a while back and yu still haven`t updated so I take it your not going to bother updating I say oh well there are other stories to read so later
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 00:29 CST
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I like this story but I was wondering when are you going to update its already been a monthso please update soon heck with how short the chapters are you could have atleast 4 to 5 chapters done by now oh well I guess I will justhave to wait because that damn Fanfiction.net site for some reason doesn`t want to work for me yet again
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 13:11 CST
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The story is whenever you do decide to update other than that I lke the story and please and I mean PLEASE do not turn this into a yaoi if you do then I will say screw this and never read this story again because I hate yaoi stories because there are way way to many of them oh well please update soon and kep up the good work
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 11:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kakashi's rather chilly dismissal might be exactly what she needs, so hopefully this will be a turning point for Aza. Though it's never a good sign when someone starts hearing voices. By the way, general consensus is that Yondaime's name is Arashi.
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 11:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You may not update with very much, or very often, but when you do, it's always worth the wait.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 09:55 CST
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OH man that was good! I feel for Naruto and Sasuke its his mother keeps betraying him when she goes to Sasuke after finding out what happened to the Uchiha totally forgeting Naruto! I could be mad at her too! Keep up the good work and update soon again, thanks!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2006 12:32 CST
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The story is good but come on and update the story I kinda have a feeling it won`t be updated anytime soon
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Title: really good story
Reviewed By: tho-lobo On: December 27, 2006 05:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
seriously this is one the best fan fiction stories i have read. Keep it up. Your doing great.I love the storyline. don't take too long to update can't wait for the rest of the story.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 23:23 CST
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The letter is cool and touching but please dont wait to long before updateing!!!
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Reviewed By: redsnake15 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 16:01 CST
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dont wait that long to update
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love The Chapter:12 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: peregrine829 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Always a pleasure to read your updates. Naruto has been given an opportunity which I'm sure Sasuke would kill to have, and he'll be damned before he lets Naruto waste it.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 On: December 07, 2006 13:45 CST
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That chapter was ok I kinda think he should give her another chance oh well update soon
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 01:04 CST
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I love this please update soon pretty please with a cherry on top.
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