| "The Protector of Her Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 80 ] |
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Reviewed By: dancin4inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 19:48 CST
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I just wanted to demand that you update. ASAP. I love the way you've made everyone meet and work together in such a similar way as the real story. Very well done. And updates, please!
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope the visit to Sesshomaru is going to be at least a good one, I think. Well hope you update and keep up this wonderful story. Peace.
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Reviewed By: Rachelle On: January 03, 2007 13:18 CST
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You are doing great with this story!! keep up the good work and update soon!!! plz!!
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Title: Great Job!
Reviewed By: JtTeE [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 10:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first off, let me congratulate you because this fiction is really well written. I like the twist that you have put on the original prince marries poor girl storyline. There were some obvious little bloopers though, such as how at the beginning, Mrs. Higurashi left an infant Sota at the Western Castle while she went back to her husband? Not only would Sota need breast-feeding (I guess you could say there was a wet nurse), but I doubt any mother much less a queen would leave their infant child behind if there was a choice - in which case, Sota would have traveled with his mother. Age is a hard thing to work with in works of fiction, so it was an easy mistake to make J. You also seemed to have downplayed Inuyasha's senses of smell and his presumable sense of danger both times that Kagome underwent danger (the poisoning and the recent abduction). Even if there were no official tasters of the food at court, Inuyasha should have been able to smell the poison. Anyways, this work of fiction seems to be really well thought out and planned. Everything is fitting nicely together. I like your writing style and your speed of updating. Thank you for writing this and happy New Year!
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Reviewed By: Princess_of_fire [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 04:04 CST
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I really love your story and I cant wait to know what are Narakus plans and how will Inuyasha save Kagome.Please update soon.^_^
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2007 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I just finished your 12 chapters and I have to say they were very well written. And I really like this story. So in hopes that you keep this up and to update. Peace.
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Title: YAY!!
Reviewed By: Inuyasha_crazy_fan2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2006 20:29 CST
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Great chapter i was soo worried about if inu was going to get there in time or not and i was also worried if u were going to cut it off bfore anyone could find out! lol well Merry Christmas and happy new year!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 00:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 23:28 CST
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FYI, the page keeps getting shorter and cutting off the words. thought you might want to know so you could fix it!!! BYE^_^
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 23:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ooohhhh!! please review soon!! i really need to know what happens and what the cure is please try to update befopre x-mas.-tnxs
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Title: Save da Princess InuYasha!!!!
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome On: December 12, 2006 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg i take back everything i said i love your fic im so caught up in it now wow wow wow please update soon the suspence is killing me im gonna die im crying this is a master peice sure genius omg your terrific ok 4 christmas i want at least 3 updates i love you your the greatest and always will be if you just UPDATE SOON muh muh i love u*
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Title: long live da queen
Reviewed By: half cat demon kagome On: December 12, 2006 18:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok not being mean but i just got through reading chapter 2 i am not liking the way the story is going but im gonna keep reading does inuyasha know that fluffy is his brother and vice versa and i dont appreciate inuyasha backstabbing kagome that is nothing like him inuyasha is t honorable and would not do somthing like that i hope this story has a happy ending for the two well besides all of that its real good and can you please tell me if there is gonna be a love triangle between kagome inuyasha and the undead miko (well she is not dead in your fic but i would like it if she did die because i dont like her i like naraku more than her well good job bye
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Title: YAY!!
Reviewed By: Inuyasha_crazy_fan2 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 15:08 CST
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Yay! another chapter!! this story is great keep writing.. u make my day when i find out u made a new chapter
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Reviewed By: Leanne5582 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 01:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! I love your story! waiting as patiently as possible for the next chapter! keep up the good work!
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Title: Amazing..
Reviewed By: Inu HanYoukai Kiya On: December 09, 2006 11:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've never get into something like this before. I couldn't help it and printed everything out just so I could read the rest before going to bed! AWESOME STORY! I CAN'T wait for the next chapter!
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