| "The Girl Next Door" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] |
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Reviewed By: sucker4romance [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 17:30 CST
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Reviewed By: sucker4romance [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 17:27 CST
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oohh! update soon please, that was a great chapp!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 08:15 CST
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Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 02:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your story is kinda cute. I did notice some spelling errors. I also wanted to make a few sugestions. I think you put to much discription into what they are wearing. I know that being in high school, that clothes are important to you, but to many readers it's just boring info not needed.In your story Inuyasha is a demon with all his normal abilities, is that correct? I was wondering why he couldn't 'smell' the difference between the two?Your story is good, keep writing and it will only get better over time. You may want to get a beta or two to help you catch those errors. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: megster6 On: December 10, 2006 01:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
'OMG!' I really like this story is just, wow! I can't wait until the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: krystalmoonstarlight On: December 09, 2006 22:12 CST
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great story wirte more please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hoshizora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 21:43 CST
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ahaha...guys PMS-ing...XD Oh...InuYasha, it took you long enough! :D
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Reviewed By: Pati [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
diz is gettin' iteresting please update soon
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know that i may be the only one who thinks this but i think it's getting a little rushed... jsut a thought though... i still love this fic... update soon please!!! =)
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Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 17:53 CST
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shoooort but good. i liked it. but ya left me hangin' man! girl! dudette? that song! ooo, you're gonna get it now! just kidding. but did you get that idea from me?
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Reviewed By: Lifes_untold_stories [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 17:25 CST
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Wow your week was eventful! This story is coming along great, so update soon, or when evil jock stop thier hair fetishs (however you spell this evil word)
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 23:38 CST
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i love it!! update soon!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 12:14 CST
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This story is absolutly friggin awsome! I love it! Can't wait to find out what happens between Inu and Kag. Please update ASAP!
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Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2006 01:09 CST
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YAY! me like! keep em comin!
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 21:20 CST
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why couldn't kag just make her move there??? argh!!! update ASAP!!!!=)
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