| "The Girl Next Door" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] |
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Title: THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
Reviewed By: Gillster On: January 30, 2007 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is the best fanfic i've ever read. in fact its the one that inspired me to start writing fanfic's myself.plese try and finish this story. i want to see if they end up together or not.
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 08:11 CST
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HELLS YEAH!!!!!! update soon!
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Reviewed By: super_anime_fan4eva On: January 29, 2007 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor kagome getting caught w/ Inuyasha's bagel crazed dad... great story tho!!! hope u get better in spanish!
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Reviewed By: Hoshizora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 17:42 CST
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Nice chapter...I liked the end. XD Bagels are good...sorta but I hate jelly. (If you really need help in Spanish, I could help you! I got a 5 in my AP exam, and I took it for 2 years in Middle School. My Spanish teacher loved me, so she showed me easy ways to everything, even the accents!)
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 08:23 CST
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Great chapter! It's sad that you won't be able to update for awhile. I hope you do good in spanish. Looking forward to your next update!
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Reviewed By: Warah21 On: January 28, 2007 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story! it's so good. and i'm so sad that you can't review for 4 weeks. i won't flame you because i take french and so can imagine what you're going through with spanish. anyways great job... does the sequel include kikyo being publicaly imbarrassed in a huge way? or does she die, or even better yet does she have to go to prom or even marry the nerd inuyasha caught her with? (Ernie?) bye
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Reviewed By: Q_Q_Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 17:25 CST
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Great Chapter. Yeah u should update Just By luck, it's awesome too. That was so sweet, Inu kissed Kag.
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 16:30 CST
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wow... now that just SUCKS! well... you just try hard and i know how it is not to have your computer... different reasons for different situations but i still know it... lol so anyway! i hope you get up those grades and i'll be waiting for the next update!!! =)
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Reviewed By: Pati [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 15:16 CST
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i hope u make a sequel of this story
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Title: Yo!!
Reviewed By: HigherBeing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 14:59 CST
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ohhh crackers... that was a very evil cliffer ya left us there... tsk tsk. Oh, and for that Spanish problem you have, I'm spanish. Bilingual, a Latino-american, one who speaks the language in the household and speaks english at the school... hold... -_-'. I'm Puertorican... but they STILL put me in Spanish 2... I figured since i knew the language they could have bumped me up to spanish 3 or something... psh... fricken retards, i still hate them for that. But here I am... an A in Spanish 2. yay me! So... yep; if you need help, e-mail me or somethin'. au revoi! (I'm working on being trilingual, ^_~, jk)
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 14:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A cliffy? tsk tsk tsk...evil i tell ya!! *grins* Update soon
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Title: me again!
Reviewed By: pretty_princess_2k6! On: January 28, 2007 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope u get 2 update soon!its getting better everytime.sooooo...plz update as soon as u can.oh! and i kno a bit of spanish....coz my moms half spnish and her moms spanish.and it goes on and on in my family.so i can help u,if ya want?if u want me 2 help u email me on misha_lakhani@hotmail.com k.lol!! ^_^ Anyway....its really getting good,and i hope u update very soon.keep up the good work ^_^
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Title: U used my jelly idea!Yeah!
Reviewed By: Koga'sChick [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 13:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
U used the idea i gave u!GO ME!n/e way that was good and as 4 Spanish,go to google,try Babel translation and pick English to Spanish.Type in words and stuff and translate them!It'll help u.Than 2 do it the other way around,click and scroll to Spanish to English.That was a helpful hint and you can learn certain words there(how 2 sp not say though).
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 16:08 CST
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shit intense damn anyways plz update soon
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Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 15:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
no no no!!!! it didn't offend me or anything no i didnt mean to put it like that im sry realli realli sry!!!! it just pisses me off cuz its kikho..hehh^^ anyways thanks for ur update i was dying to know what wut gunna happen
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