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| "The Girl Next Door" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] | | Pages (13): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 › » ] | Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 20:39 CST
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I liked this chap. please update amap(as much as possible, lol). btw, you dont happen to live in southern cali, do you? not much other places get all thanksgiving week off.
| Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 16:46 CST
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that was so sad! poor kags! in love with inu and she can't tell him!!! you once said that kikyo was screwing a nerd to get high grades... inu is going to cath her right? and then he and kags can finally be happy yay!!! or at least i hope so... lol... =)
| Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: QQ On: November 19, 2006 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i finished ur fanfic today. it was pretty awesome. how old r u and did u write songs because if u did. that would have been awesome awesome. update soon!!!
| Title: I love it
Reviewed By: QQ On: November 19, 2006 14:37 CST
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Hey, I got the same feelin. I don't like Kikyo either she's so cold and scary.
| Title: Exciting
Reviewed By: 6angel9 On: November 19, 2006 10:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its a good write. I can't wait to read what happens next. Update please. You are doing an awesome job
| Title: :D
Reviewed By: Sango 45 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 22:08 CST
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ILoveYourStory!!UpdateSoonOrI'llDieO.O' (SpacebarIsBroked...heh-.-)
| Reviewed By: super_anime_fan4eva On: November 18, 2006 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic!!! i luv it good thing 2mrrw is sunday cuz i can't wait 2 read the next ch. all the way til the end!! Great job, but one thing is ayame, sango, mir, kouga, and everyone else gonna find out? if its part of the plot don't tell me! i wanna find out anyway, yea fantastic story!
| Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 11:58 CST
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update! please!
| Reviewed By: Pati [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!but can the update be longer?
| Reviewed By: cursed l0ve [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 09:21 CST
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i love this story! but i wasnt able to read the whole chapter 11.. it's cut off could u upload it again or something? thanks!!! ^-^
| Reviewed By: Pati [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2006 21:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thaanks for writting it really made my day after finding out that the boy i like is going out with i girl i know since 5th grade. i made it better
| Title: The Girl Next Door
Reviewed By: Kogasgurl/Jam maybe... On: November 17, 2006 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay first of all,a.)Yes,I survived and b.)I will NOT stop writing stupid things!Sorry I didn't read this chappy ealier even though I already read it!Here,I made up a quote/song thing... What if the secert I had to keep,could save you from yourself,If it was the only way to save you,but I wouldn't tell you,instead I save everyone else,To gain your trust and drop it down,Down further than the ground,If I made a promise I counldn't keep,To make so many weep,If I would die tonight would you cry,I need to know are you the guy,Please tell me before I give into the sky,I need to know,Are you the guy,Things can fade,Things go on,But would your love keep going strong,If I was gone for so long,Don't ask me why,But are you the guy,You don't know that I like you,I won't tell,I don't know why.I just don't want you to die,So I'll take your place,like a trapped man eating fly,make so many give into the sky,Black clouded sky,shadows kill the night,Huge sharp teeth,crows in the sky,A lingering thought,An innocent dream,the body found last time,Dead as my dreams,Tears of red run down my face,I want to die in your grace.I need to know are you the guy,Please tell me before I give into the sky,I need to know,Are you the guy?Things can fade,Things go on,But would your love keep going strong,If I was gone for so long,Don't ask me why,But are you the guy,I get fed to Cebreus,gnawing on my skin,A million needles down my back,Blood flows out,Forget me now,Forget me not,did she die,From the pot?Things can fade,Things go on but would your love keep going strong?Are you the guy?Now I lay me down to sleep,I pray the Lord my soul to keep,If I should die before I wake,I pray the Lord my soul to take... Ain't it so totally awesome?Oh ur storey is so cool! So Ne way,Miss Smitty Dragon,I WILL write more things b/c I din't have to hear her complain~MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Points finger at Smitty Dragon,"Sorry!Wait,no I'm not,I enjoyed to see other people in pain from Nicole!Now if u'll excuse me,I have an anger menagment/Sadism is not good class!C ya sucker!I hope she complains 2 x as much!" XO!*puts gunin pocket*"I need this to shoot that damn cherry teacher thats just as unditructable as a fucking bug,or Nicole..."(just kidding McFolley! ~Ur 1 cuz,Ashley!~ This thing keeps making me redo it!*pouts*~3rd try...~
| Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2006 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so good! although i think that maybe kikyo could just suffer an accident and die and make everyone happy... including herself... lol... =) great chapter!
| Title: Ummmm Okay?
Reviewed By: Chippy/Maybe Jam On: November 15, 2006 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah,its cool and all but I read ur reviews....I don't think Wynter(sp?) likes me....*Quickly runs away*.
| Reviewed By: yo! On: November 15, 2006 15:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!! keep it up and update!!
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