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| "The Girl Next Door" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] | | Pages (13): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 › » ] | Reviewed By: Pati [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 09:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
everything is great please update soon.
| Reviewed By: yeahsurewhateverrr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 03:31 CST
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i love just about everything. sentences can be a little more complex, but whatever floats your boat. you write it & review, deal? (: ooh, but you absolutely have to spell 'straight' correctly next time. i was practically keeling over in my chair because it wasn`t spelled right. LOL.
| Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 01:14 CST
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btw, who ppl are f***ing weird. not tweak. the rest of you. (Sare: spoken like a true southern cali girl. BB: shut up. Sare: that too BB: SHUT UP!)random review
| Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2006 01:08 CST
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I like it. i can relate the confused thing. i hate being confused. ugh
| Title: Aye.
Reviewed By: SmittyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 21:46 CST
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I just totally forgot what i was going to type. (Wynter sits thinking about random stuff for awhile.) Oh yeah keep up the great work on your story. Also the pictures you put on our notebook are fucking hilarious. Anyways I hope you have a happy thanksgiving with your disfunctional family. I know i won't, i don't think my brother will even be there.
| Reviewed By: Ashie On: November 22, 2006 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hint hint!I CAN'T write u an E-mail b/c I don't have an E-mail!This is the only way I can say stuff and u said it would be funny if I had a review fight with Wynter!I'm sorry that that's the only way I can talk to you without forgeting it the next day.I guess I won't write.Besides I didn't point the random stuff it toward the reviewers!That was between you and me so whatever!I guess I won't review but that doesn't mean I won't read it again.So keep writing,because I do like your storey but I didn't know it was a crime to talk to you oaky?Sue me.Ashie,I hope your stories go great okay?I'm sorry,I guess I'm talking to you agian.So here is my last words for the stories,both of them,good job and bye.I won't bug you agian!SUBJECT DROPPED!
| Title: Must kill Ashley
Reviewed By: SmittyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 14:10 CST
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Tweak's reviewer don't mind kogasgurls/jam maybe, she just has a stick shoved up her ass to far, that it just happens to be cutting off the oxygen from her brain. Ashley i'm going to disembowel you then i will hang you be your intestine. And if you are still remotely alive( which you shouldn't be but anyways) I will rip out your liver and force feed it to you. ( Wynter looks around thinking) Other reviews please just ignore kogasgurls/jam maybe and me. Oh yeah please don't take us Seriously and call they authorities, it's just mindless fun. (I think)
| Title: I can spell Wynter(alas
Reviewed By: kogasgurl/jam maybe... On: November 20, 2006 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wynter
| Title: MUHAHAHA!WYNTER!(gosh dammit!Sp?)
Reviewed By: kogasgurls/jam maybe... On: November 20, 2006 19:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No Wnyter!It is u that will suffer!May u be hurt and have alcohol and salt rubbed in your bloody wounds!Then you shall have every hair painfully picked out!Then have your eyelashes grabbed out and have your ears cut off!Then I will srap my nails onto a calk board!Then your fingers shall be sown together and ripprd back a part!Then I will make you listen to McFolley's constant bickering!MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! By:Ashie! By the way,all of u peoples just reading this for fun,I'm not THIS evil,I'm a lot worse!Ask my 1 cuz Tweak,and SmittyDragon!!!
| Title: This damn thing won't show up rite!BOO-HOO!
Reviewed By: kogasgurl/jam maybe... On: November 20, 2006 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RANDOM STUFF!!!!Squee!I luv random things!1.)If u lik rap well then u can burn in the 7 bloody layers of Hell(or Skool)!2.)If u lik rock then may the gituar b the death of u all
| Title: HAHAHAHAHA
Reviewed By: kogasgurl/jam maybe... On: November 20, 2006 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My latest work!:By:Ashie!!!OXOX lik my 5 review 2nite!!!! I hate it when you look at me,I'm a mess why can't you see?Just wanna be on my own,I can make it all alone.Darkness falls,I've got my back,Watch your ace jack.So you say you're the King of Queens,The hott dog super sapreme?I've got a lesson,Memorize it, Jump down in the bottomless pit,Empty dreams,Broken tears,Disorinated faces,A moon but no stars,Like the sun without a light,Or Hercules without his might.This is the world,The world of broken lives,take my hand,step inside.What is real and what is fake is the same in our lives.Don't be somebody else,don't make me save you from yourself.So you're stuck up and snobby,playing pranks for all the wrong reasons.The football captin,best of the baseball team,your skills are great but you're too mean.Shoot a basket and it goes swish,tired of hearing your girlfriends bitch.So you play in games and on girls but do you know the lonely world?Jump down in the bottomless pit,Empty dreams,Broken tears,disorinated faces,a moon but no stars,like the sun without a light,or Hercules without his might.This is the world,the world of broken lives,take my hand,step inside.What is real and what is fake is the same in our lives.Don't be somebody else,don't make me save you from yourself.Don't bit off more than you can chew,you just moved here,you're fairly new,I knew your bark is worse than your bit,turn it off,blow out your endless light.Do you how much pain you caused?Things that can't be replaced,like a priceless potery,or real golden gates.Greed is what got you here,I 'm here to warn that if you don't shape up the end is near.Jump down in the bottomless pit,Empty dreams,Broken tears,disorinated faces,a moon but no stars,like the sun without a light,or Hercules without his might.This is the world,the world of broken lives,take my hand,step inside.What is real and what is fake is the same in our lives.Don't be somebody else,don't make me save you from yourself.
| Title: Random Shit!
Reviewed By: kogasgurl/jam maybe... On: November 20, 2006 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
RANDOM STUFF!!!! Squee!I luv random things! 1.)If u lik rap well then u can burn in the 7 bloody layers of Hell(or Skool)! 2.)If u lik rock then may the gituar b the death of u all
| Title: MEOW
Reviewed By: SmittyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the great work, Nicole. Nicole's cousin, you are her family so you are the one who's suppose to suffer. I will make sure Nicole will make you suffer. For I am all that is evil and you will bow down before me. Plus you're a Maldita puta. ( insert evil laughter here) Nicole do you want us to post Deathless here?
| Reviewed By: Pati [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 09:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you can upload soon.
| Title: *SOB*
Reviewed By: super_anime_fan4eva On: November 19, 2006 23:37 CST
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pooor kagz.... but it was her fault in him finding out that makes her miserable tho, not him, she couldn't b mad at him when she is in love..... and inu course likes her back he just like kik becuz of her status, right? i will read on til the happy ending! bye ya!
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