| "The Girl Next Door" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] |
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Title: chpt 8
Reviewed By: Inu_Kagome_4Life [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay when kikho was like ewww wut r u goth? i swear i felt like punchin the shit out of her....(cuz imma goth)
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2006 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that last chapter was hilarious! glad you took my advice in mind... hope this time you update sooner! =)
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Title: hey hey
Reviewed By: PARTYGIRL101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2006 20:27 CST
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hey , just started reading this and have to say its pretty good...that all i have to say ! Have a happy new year!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: "the girl next door's" diehard fan!!
Reviewed By: sucker4romance [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleas eplease PLEASE update sooon! i know how annoying updating is, it takes a while to write out the new chaps, thats why i have never finished writing a fanfiction, but obviously, you are MUCH better at it then me, so please update soon!
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Reviewed By: kagome313 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2006 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome!!! I LOVE THIS FIC!! You so have to update....Seasons Greetings! Hope you update soon,and that you read my fic ^___^
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Reviewed By: sucker4romance [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 17:31 CST
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aww damn it didn't even show my comment! well i sed please update soon with 10 prettys before th eplease and a cherry on top after the please. LOL
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Reviewed By: sucker4romance [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 17:30 CST
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Reviewed By: sucker4romance [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2006 17:27 CST
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oohh! update soon please, that was a great chapp!
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Reviewed By: silveraliora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2006 08:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: nancey [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 02:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your story is kinda cute. I did notice some spelling errors. I also wanted to make a few sugestions. I think you put to much discription into what they are wearing. I know that being in high school, that clothes are important to you, but to many readers it's just boring info not needed.In your story Inuyasha is a demon with all his normal abilities, is that correct? I was wondering why he couldn't 'smell' the difference between the two?Your story is good, keep writing and it will only get better over time. You may want to get a beta or two to help you catch those errors. Keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: megster6 On: December 10, 2006 01:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
'OMG!' I really like this story is just, wow! I can't wait until the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: krystalmoonstarlight On: December 09, 2006 22:12 CST
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great story wirte more please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hoshizora [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 21:43 CST
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ahaha...guys PMS-ing...XD Oh...InuYasha, it took you long enough! :D
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Reviewed By: Pati [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
diz is gettin' iteresting please update soon
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Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i know that i may be the only one who thinks this but i think it's getting a little rushed... jsut a thought though... i still love this fic... update soon please!!! =)
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