| "Won't You Please Stay With Me?" Reviews/Comments [ 154 ] |
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Reviewed By: catherine! On: September 02, 2007 08:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent!!! Thats last part woz bloody funny!! hope u update soon!!!
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Title: brillent!
Reviewed By: lost_in_dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I loved it! WOO! YOU ARE AWESOME!
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Reviewed By: catherine! On: August 30, 2007 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story.. really i do but a little advice.. if ya gunna write a story set in a different country.. make sure you get oyur facts right! firstly.. we dont i repeat DON'T have cream in our tea!!!!! secondly.. its bathroom... he's english...there is no such thing as a 'washroom' over here! i no it may sounds as if im picking but it gets seriously annoying when amerians/canadians write fanfics on Harry Potter then don't bother to learn what the characaters would actually say... we have different traditions over here.. oh nd btw.. what the hell is taffy?! is it liquorice or sumthing? cos you wouldn't b able to get that in a restaurant.. or nything like that to take away for that matter...oh and wen Harry gets an A u forget to tell us wen he tells his friends then you have hermione saying Mrs Weasley says well done. sorry for being picky but please try look at these point as it would make your fic a whole lot better. great story tho...
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Reviewed By: Ohhhh On: August 29, 2007 12:18 CDT
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*blush* stairs at the writer oh...my...god......*blush* not for the young at any rate. I wondered when snape would finaly give in.....*blush* This is coming from a woman who never blushes, and you did it. Congrats and update.... i cant wait for the ending.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: puffin32781 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 21:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this chapter and I loved how this one ended. I can't wait to read about the wedding. Keep up the great work and update as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: nevertooclear On: August 26, 2007 10:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please...update soon..its been too long!
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Reviewed By: M_D On: August 23, 2007 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love it!!!!! plz update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ~jennyfer On: August 18, 2007 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! I love it. Keep it up. PLEASE. ♥
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Reviewed By: Rory921 On: August 15, 2007 09:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
loved it...it was great, dont stop
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Title: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Reviewed By: lost_in_dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Hurry it up! gosh dang it! waaaa! I want my HP and SS! hmm, I wonder who Snaps best man is? *thinks* oh well, anyway, so, um....GREAT CHAPTER! cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 21:58 CDT
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Absolutely wonderful...I love the way that you describe the ring Harry is going to give Severus...makes me want ot get one... And I can just imagine the gown that Harry is wearing.... can't for the Wedding!!!!1
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Title: OMYG!
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was to short! *runs around room* I'm gonna have a heart attack! This fic is so damn good! *fall's to the floor* Some one, help me, help me get it through your head I'm going crazy cause your fic is so GREAT! WOO! *faints*
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Title: Nekomew78
Reviewed By: Phoenix Fire754 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10/10 Just like always. Your story is tons better than 'its all about hermione'. Thanks for updating so quickly, I love how exited Harry is about the wedding. I think how you discribed his suit was just awsome. i'm sure I'm missing somthing...who is snapes best man? Dumbeldore, perhaps? Or Voldemort, lol.
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Title: couldn't help it
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2007 03:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I couldn't help it, I had to write again! I just love your fic! I so cant wait for the next one! You know it's funny, I started reading this, and I was like, wow, this doesn't even bother me, I mean I have nothing against gays, but you know, you kinda know when it's noticeable, but this, this is perfect! I was like, OMYG! in a good way! WOOO! *faints*
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Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 09:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ring is genius! It's TOO perfect for the couple! Can't wait to read the rest of the fic!!
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