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"Won't You Please Stay With Me?" Reviews/Comments [ 154 ]
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 Reviewed By: JuJubean  On: December 04, 2006 14:52 CST
Comment/Review:
the story was so cute so your forgiven for taking so long. update soon
 Title: i loved it : }
Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 03, 2006 22:35 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
yes you've finally updated. it was so good. i loved the dragon and snape getting jelous over it. omgosh i almost cried my eyes out when snape asked him to marry him soooo cute. oooh i can't wait til they have their first kiss. this story was super awsome. what i'm i saying, all your stories are awsome. i can't wait til the next chapter so update soon.
 Title: you are just soooo.... good
Reviewed By: LostInTheRain84 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 03, 2006 19:31 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ahh as i said in the title you are just soooo.... good. Jesus christ! how do you do it? huh?? how do you do it?? yes thats a rhetorical question... I just wished you knew me and could see my expression because they'd make so much more sense if you knew me, but anyway moving on... I hardly ever blush and I always find myself blushing when I read this it's crazy you are just insanely good at writting that's all there is to it... insanely good. That dragon was absolutelty the cutest pet i think anyone could've gotten good idea. Omg that whole sunset seen was just so incredibly romantic I never even expected anything like that to happen and Harry wanting to try out kissing!!!! Omg I just flipped out completely flipped out, and thats so funny that he missed because it's happened to everyone I think... I remember when I was playing spin the bottle and my friend had to kiss me they kissed my nose haha that was funny... the eye thing was just adorable ^^.... o yes and even though you have convinced me to fall head over heels for this story I still have to say that Gay Sanctum is my absolute favorite of yours! and you haven't updated in soooo long is there anyway you could update that one??? I would be so happy I miss that story and find myself always going back and re-reading it... so please update on that and this whenever you get the chance! *begs on knees* I'm definitely not to proud to beg... o and sorry this is so long
 Reviewed By: DreamingOfTomorrow [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 03, 2006 13:06 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is great but it's been so long since you updated... it seems... maybe not... anyway. Update soon, pretty please?
 Title: Wahaaaaaaaaaaaa!
Reviewed By: Nekokitty78  On: December 02, 2006 22:10 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I gave you ten out of ten and yet you refuse to update! C'mon! it has been forever, you know! Hurry please!
 Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 01, 2006 15:58 CST
Comment/Review:
okay if you don't update within a week i swear i'm going to die. PLEASE UPDATE
 Reviewed By: Yami_hime [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 30, 2006 04:05 CST
Comment/Review:
write more!!! damn you, I'm getting addicted to your stories! I liked your story Fire and Ice (or whatever the name is XD) this story is the best! I like Snape. He's about the sexiest person ever.. so please write more!!! please please.. *starts begging* XD
 Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: Nekokitty78  On: November 29, 2006 11:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Whats up with you? You need to update!! i havent seen a new chapter since before thanksgiving! WE love your work and we want you to update, so hurry up soon!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: newdkidt [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 27, 2006 17:24 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON PLEASE
 Title: Fluffy
Reviewed By: Neko_anime_Neko  On: November 27, 2006 14:47 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this story, you need to update it, please hurry, i want to read more!!!!
 Reviewed By: annette  On: November 27, 2006 14:18 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like your story. It's very easy to get in to. Please continue on with this story I would like to see it completed.
 Title: I have returned
Reviewed By: LostInTheRain84 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 21, 2006 23:33 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ok so I haven't been able to review your last to chapters because a lot has been happening... but tonight I finally got to read them... I think they're better than ever! You always seem to surprise me... haha when harry asked snape to dance, I didn't realize harry did it at first and then when I figured it out (I'm a little slow tonight) I had the same reaction he wanted to have. My hand instantly flew to cover my mouth I thought it was funny... but I was so shocked. This story is just getting better and better... like all your other stories so keep it up ^^
 Title: WHY HAVENT YOU UPDATED???
Reviewed By: Angelmonkey546  On: November 20, 2006 11:07 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
THIS IS AN AWSOME FAN FICTION AND I DONT UNDERSTAND WHY YOU HAVENT UPDATED> YOUR AWSOME!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE !!!! THIS IS THE COOLEST FAN FICT EVER!!!!
 Reviewed By: Sarahfreak  On: November 19, 2006 04:31 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Chapter Eight alreday? Holy crap...you are doing sooooooooo well to be updating and writing so well in such a short time....please keep it up and update soon...you've got a fan in me!
 Title: Awwww
Reviewed By: What> I dont want to enter a nick name  On: November 17, 2006 22:58 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your doing an amasing job. Please update!!! Your totaly rock!!!!! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!!! dont keep your fans waiting for long!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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