| "Won't You Please Stay With Me?" Reviews/Comments [ 154 ] |
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Reviewed By: debbie On: January 13, 2008 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOU! MAKE ANOTHER ONE! YES! GOD, THAT WAS THE BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOO!
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Title: Swearing!
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 aka A.J. On: January 10, 2008 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear to everything good and Holy, this is one of my favorite stories! I've probably said this many times but you style of writing is very descriptive and makes it seems as if I am right there watching Severus and Harry's relationship unravel and form in front of me. I'm loving it and I can't wait until I read the sequel! Continue writing and you will continue to hear from me!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 19:35 CST
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Your fic was awsome I love it and Enjoyed it sooo Much!!! I would love to read a sequel/.... I will try to read your next fic if it is as good as this one... LOVED IT!
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Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 16:20 CST
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i loved it. it wz awesome and i hope u make a sequel...i'd totally read sequel!!!!!!!!!
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Title: *foaming at mouth*
Reviewed By: Itachi's True Enemy On: January 07, 2008 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*can't stop screaning and twitching in absolute fear* Alter Ego: It was great like always, Zega,but you might have broken my vessel..........
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Reviewed By: diobeckstead [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 20:23 CST
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The problem with this fic is you seem to have ignored how horrible Snape has been to Harry over the years. The whole believability factor is lost without any proper rationalization. Character dev is a little on the weak side as well. Otherwise, a well written fiction.
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Reviewed By: Em On: September 25, 2007 05:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well done. as for the riddle. my guess is blocs. take away the first - (locs/lox) put back the first take away the second - (bocs/box) soo... that is most likely wrong but still... it fits. Keep writing and I can't wait to see the next chapter.
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Title: woohoo!!!!!i :heart; it!^^
Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!...this chappie wz awesome...great lemon great evrything!^^...o i'm puttin up a story too...it's gonna b up in a minute and u can also catch it on hpfandom.net and in a week on fanfiction.net...it's called 'Dearest Consort!...i luved the idea of sub!Harry so i used it!...hope u check it out!^^
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 07:51 CDT
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Loved the wedding...I really wish I would have been there... Harry's vows were so beautiful they just really flowed together.... can;t wiat for the next chapter...,
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Title: Sad to see it close to the end
Reviewed By: puffin32781 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2007 06:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe its so close to the end. You said only one more chapter. This was a great story and I really can't wait to see what the answer to your riddle is. Anyways, this was great. I'll see you next chapter and your next story.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 22:05 CDT
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That was before the weeding..Wonder how after the weeding is going to be... Canto wait!
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Reviewed By: catherine! On: September 02, 2007 08:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent!!! Thats last part woz bloody funny!! hope u update soon!!!
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Title: brillent!
Reviewed By: lost_in_dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2007 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! I loved it! WOO! YOU ARE AWESOME!
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Reviewed By: catherine! On: August 30, 2007 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story.. really i do but a little advice.. if ya gunna write a story set in a different country.. make sure you get oyur facts right! firstly.. we dont i repeat DON'T have cream in our tea!!!!! secondly.. its bathroom... he's english...there is no such thing as a 'washroom' over here! i no it may sounds as if im picking but it gets seriously annoying when amerians/canadians write fanfics on Harry Potter then don't bother to learn what the characaters would actually say... we have different traditions over here.. oh nd btw.. what the hell is taffy?! is it liquorice or sumthing? cos you wouldn't b able to get that in a restaurant.. or nything like that to take away for that matter...oh and wen Harry gets an A u forget to tell us wen he tells his friends then you have hermione saying Mrs Weasley says well done. sorry for being picky but please try look at these point as it would make your fic a whole lot better. great story tho...
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Reviewed By: Ohhhh On: August 29, 2007 12:18 CDT
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*blush* stairs at the writer oh...my...god......*blush* not for the young at any rate. I wondered when snape would finaly give in.....*blush* This is coming from a woman who never blushes, and you did it. Congrats and update.... i cant wait for the ending.
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