| "All My Dreams Are Torn Asunder" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lily_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2009 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do love this fic. I've read it a few times now, and it never loses its appeal. If you do end up expanding it, I want to see the reactions of the gang when they find out that a) Hiei ran out on them and b) his mate is a time-traveling miko (my guess is that Kuwa faints on hearing that Hiei even has a mate). That would make my day.
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Title: Panda-san
Reviewed By: White_Witch_Sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! The first time I read this, I wasn't a member. Now that I am I have made it a favorite. I just can't get enought of it I hope that you continue it, I would love to see this be come a epic story. Please keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 14:36 CST
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this is a good story, i hope to read more soon. i cant wait for yusuke's reaction to hiei having a mate or for kagome to meet a grown up shippo
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Reviewed By: Lily_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 18:25 CST
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i have to say, i've never exactly been fond of crossovers, but this one was so well done i just may have to convert XP. i've now read several of your stories, and i have to say they're all very well written. and now i'm going to read some more. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 08:46 CDT
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this was a great story
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Title: All My Dreams are Torn Asunder
Reviewed By: Scarlet Butterfly On: March 27, 2008 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very good one. Normally I'd protest to the story ending but this was a pretty good place to do so, I wouldn't complain if you chose to end it here. Even though it ended good I can see it continuing as Naraku hadn't been defeated and Yusuke and Kurama still haven't gotten their explaination. Also with Kagome's family and is InuYasha going to be able to come back or not? Many possibilities. I look forward to it continuing if you decide to.
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Reviewed By: Blue Wolf Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am among the people who would like to see this become a full story. In fact I'm on my knees begging for you to do just that.
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Reviewed By: SilverDrache On: January 28, 2008 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely amazing. It is always a joy to read your stories.
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Reviewed By: Hieis_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 23:35 CDT
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perfect ten, I wish you would convert this from a two-shot, it could turn out quite good if continued
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome for a two-shot.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 07:23 CDT
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up date soon! i love it!
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Reviewed By: (sarah) On: January 10, 2007 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I have to say this is the most original story I've ever come across for the simple fact that...the jewel was destroyed? lol I love that. I've never read a story where the writter has done that before and I've read quite a few :) I also love your style of writting and the detail of things and how your not afraid to hurt the main characters and make them imperfect (like with sango getting injured and miroku sucking in the jewel) Needless to say I can't wait for an update and to see how the spirit detectives react to everything :) Now that I think about it this is the first story I've read where they were older than Kagome as well. Kudos!
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Reviewed By: Bloody_blades On: December 12, 2006 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story please keep going!
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Reviewed By: Magiknight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 01:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was my first ever Hiei/Kagome fiction and I blame you entirely for my newest pairing obsession. Between the seperation, reunion and kiss I didn't know if I should cry, laugh, or light up a cigarette.
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Reviewed By: Tallia On: December 04, 2006 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope to God you write another chapter! This story is so freaking wicked!! I know you have alot of stories going on (all of them amzazing by the way) but if you ever get the chance to continue T really hope you take it - awesome story!!!! I love it!
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