| "All My Dreams Are Torn Asunder" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blue Wolf Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am among the people who would like to see this become a full story. In fact I'm on my knees begging for you to do just that.
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Reviewed By: SilverDrache On: January 28, 2008 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely amazing. It is always a joy to read your stories.
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Reviewed By: Hieis_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 23:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
perfect ten, I wish you would convert this from a two-shot, it could turn out quite good if continued
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome for a two-shot.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 07:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
up date soon! i love it!
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Reviewed By: (sarah) On: January 10, 2007 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I have to say this is the most original story I've ever come across for the simple fact that...the jewel was destroyed? lol I love that. I've never read a story where the writter has done that before and I've read quite a few :) I also love your style of writting and the detail of things and how your not afraid to hurt the main characters and make them imperfect (like with sango getting injured and miroku sucking in the jewel) Needless to say I can't wait for an update and to see how the spirit detectives react to everything :) Now that I think about it this is the first story I've read where they were older than Kagome as well. Kudos!
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Reviewed By: Bloody_blades On: December 12, 2006 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story please keep going!
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Reviewed By: Magiknight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 01:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was my first ever Hiei/Kagome fiction and I blame you entirely for my newest pairing obsession. Between the seperation, reunion and kiss I didn't know if I should cry, laugh, or light up a cigarette.
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Reviewed By: Tallia On: December 04, 2006 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope to God you write another chapter! This story is so freaking wicked!! I know you have alot of stories going on (all of them amzazing by the way) but if you ever get the chance to continue T really hope you take it - awesome story!!!! I love it!
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Reviewed By: Kielle On: November 19, 2006 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this story is freakin brilliant!!! Please, please, PLEASE continue this fic - it has to by far be one of the best/ no the best hiei/kag fic I've ever read - heck its one of the best crossover fics ive read - please consider continuing this! (alright fan-girl mode off) Your writing style is consistently beautiful and your story ideas are amazing - I bow to your greatness! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Bombi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 22:59 CST
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Its not a prob staying with you as a fan, your a great writer! Thanks for putting another chap up for this! I really can't wait to see what you'll dish out next!
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Reviewed By: PhantomAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 12:47 CST
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i love this story ^.^ it ends so sweet
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 01:04 CST
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Please make this into a real story! You never said Naraku died so he can still be the enemy! I think it will be really good. Especially with all the things that you can do when Hiei meets the family! KUKUKUKUKU! Please do an update, and soon!
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Reviewed By: KagHieiLuver On: November 12, 2006 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv it!!
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Reviewed By: airwalk55 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 23:41 CST
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Yet another wonderful chapter. I hope you'll turn this into a long story; it would do nicely. ^^ The reunion made me all fuzzy and warm. ::sigh:: I look forward to more of your works.
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