| "Embracing the Kitsune" Reviews/Comments [ 249 ] |
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 20:28 EST
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Neh, it was a basic, but interesting character. Of course, what is funny is, is what if Naruto is Inuyasha reborn? Just a thought. Anyway, the chapter wasn't great, but not bad either, overall. Just keep updating, this is starting to get interesting. Ja ne.
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Title: If you want a beta
Reviewed By: Lord_Inuyasha17 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2008 19:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I don't know if you want a beta or not but I'm very good at editing and no offense it looks like you might need one. If you want to take me up on my offer email me at ShadowGuardian08@yahoo.com. Don't use the Lord_Inuyasha17 one because I hardly ever check it. Hope to hear from you soon.
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Title: Ch. 13
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 17:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YESH!!!! *dances* that's so awesome! I luved it! Yay Gaa-chan! *glomp* Eh, its ok, no harm done w/ teh whole flashback thing! :D I can't wait until the next chapter! (so glad u didn't stick it as a cliffhanger, i would have cried XD lol) I hope 2 read more soon! *dances* -Nanu-chan
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 16:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter!!
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Reviewed By: El Ahrairah [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2008 01:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm... Kagome needs to grow another tail or two. I know a one-tailed is still powerful, but she's weak compaired to Kyuubi, and wouldn't the jewel want a powerful protector? Ehh, oh well. Mua ha ha! FEAR MY STERNNESS... Great story still ^^
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 22:35 EST
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hehe...guess what I have know Idea how this happen (I blame my e-mail for putting SOME of the story updates in my bolk insted of my inbox) but I never read that part "In your minds eye" well I have now and I'm sooooooooooo glad I did because some much make sence now....not that it was too confussing before but It did feel like something was skip....lol...all is well In Nyuka world now........also I guess I sound like a really depressing person when I write, a little of my Yang for my Yin personality If I do say so my self...well maybe its like my extiror in yin and my in side in yang and you can tell though my writing hmmm, well the reason I say this is cause first NAME THAT VIEWER I was the Movie Sleepy Hollow which is ment to be a scary depressing movie and the second one I was the Evil Glar acctrully I think its really funny ya made me laugh XD thank you for that....hehe......well any ways I can't believe the first impression Kagome left on the sand ninja's, I'm glad Naruto came to the rescue that would have gotten really ugly really fast, heck it still might all depends on how gerous you feeling.....hehe....Well I hope she don't get in too much truble......Waiting for the next update...Always............Nyuya.....'Meow'
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 21:38 EST
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I see, threatening expression, heh heh. Good chapter though! *puts on a threatening expression* now update or else.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 20:02 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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love it as always!!! please up date soon!
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Reviewed By: Methos [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 18:30 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I think this is my first time reviewing this story. Well, anyway I love it! Kagome as a fox is awesome, I think her and Naruto are so cute together. But poop on you with what you had Sasuke do to Kagome. Sasuke is cool, misguided, but cool! Well she's met Gaara, sorta, can't wait to read more!!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 23:44 EST
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Sasuke did WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....My gosh that kid is sooooooooooo stuped even in the real story I was all sad and teary when i thought he died in the beginning on their first big mission, but now when I though Naruto and Sasuke were such good friend...grrrrrrrrr...well any ways back to yours story...hehe XP......I'm glad that Sasuke didn't rape Kagome but this bit curse mark thing in no good mojo ya know...........I wander if Kagome will be able to use her holypowers ever again......hmmmm when did Kagome tell mr.fox about her holy powers and stuff....I don't remember and did she or will she ever tell Naruto the truth about where she came from?....and the Jewel was only making her crazy I'm sure she'll be fine...RIGHT?....XD......updates.........Nyuka says Meow..........XD
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 16:58 EST
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Good chapter one good thing she wasn`t raped if she was then I would have been pissed lol j/k I say have Naruto from now on when he fights Sasgay he doesn`t hold back and have Naruto KILL THAT BASTARD sorry but I don`t give a damn about Sasgay lovers kill him and get it over with oh well please update real soon please and also keepup the really good work
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 13:22 EST
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Nice one! Hmmm. Who do I feel sorrier for, -- Naruto or Kagome? Naruto thought she had a fling with Sasuke, only to find out Sasuke is still working with Orochimaru. Kagome was afraid she lost her virginity to a jerk, only to discover she may have lost the jewel, (which she didn't), BUT, now she has a curse mark from Orochimaru. Tough times ahead. Having Naruto be a little cautious about letting Jiraiya be the one to take care of her, -- especially considering exactly WHERE her curse mark is, was a nice touch of humor. And as for Sasuke, having him be the villain for once is actually rather refreshing. ^_^
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Reviewed By: inu_luver_2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 01:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this cross over fic. I love to see kagome with spunk!!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 02:11 EST
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EEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh................I dont care if you say not to jump to conclutions what they heck happened dang it this is going to kill me, since Kagome doesn't drink Saska must have drugged her, I always knew he had evil in his soul, but I still don't want him dead, I want him to get with Sakura, but then again I'm starting to think that Saska doesn't desurve her ether................Forget rotten veggies ripe ones hurt more.....Hehe *smiles with the evil entent to cause pain* >:D....Hehe update soon
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Reviewed By: Gina_031552 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2007 03:26 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is why I hate Sasuke, he is soooo annoying. I just hope Naruto will realize that Kagome will never do that to him, she is not that kind of girl, I just hope he will notice that. Anyway, nice story, your really got my emotion to blow up. You really have a way with words, I like it, and hope you update soon.
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