| "Embracing the Kitsune" Reviews/Comments [ 249 ] |
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Reviewed By: kirallie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 07:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Good work! So who was eavesdropping? Does she still have her miko powers as a half demon? So she wouldn't be totally helpless that night. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2007 02:27 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
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I really like this & am looking forward to the next chapter whenever you get it out, for my sanity I do have 1 correction though, it's not dose unless you mean doze a light or half asleep state, does is a past tense form of do & I think this is what you meant since doze doesn't make sense anywhere. Hope this helps, it was driving me nuts for some reason every time I've read this through.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 22:52 EST
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Dude Kagome what is wrong with you .....things like that should not be spoken in words for pring ears ......is she tring to get her self killed.....could she at least sence the tret.....I so mad at her right now.....sigh..... so when and how is she going to tell Naruto of her past...he has to find out some time I don't think she is going to be able to hold it in much longer....well it looks like Kagome isn't going to have much luck with her night of weakness ether Inuyasha seemed to have a near death experiance almost every new moon, poor him, well I hope you update soon gotta see how she's getting out of this one........................Nyka
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Reviewed By: This Sayuri-Sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 05:02 EST
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I HATH RETURNED!!!!! Not that it really matters but I was gone for a while....Anyway I REALLY LOVED READING THESE LAST FEW CHAPPIES!!!!!! They were so good!! And I bet that shadowy figure in the garden was Sasuke wasn't it!!! This is so awsome!!! I can't wait to sree what Orochimaru plans to do with Kagome!!!!! SSSSQ!QQQQQQQQUUUUUUUUEEEEEEE!!!! Please hurry and update like ASAP!!! GOD bless you! Also if you do add a lemon like Hime-Jun-Hi asks of you I will continue reading though I may skip over the lemon parts so please if you do add a lemon warn us before and after any lemon scenes you may add. Please and Thank you ^-^
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Reviewed By: El Ahrairah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 22:25 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Kagome is always too trusting. Update soon please?
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Reviewed By: Hime-Jun-Hi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 21:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My SISTER (PUREFIRE16)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU made my SISTER CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Do YOU KNOW how ANNOYING that GETS!!!!!!!! It's MY JOB.... NOT YOURS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IF YOU DON'T UPDATE NOW AND MAKE SURE THAT EVERYTHING IS FINE (None of the good guys get killed), AND ADD A LEMON (to make ME happy... and pay her BACK for crying).... THEN CONSIDER YOUR LIFE... FINISHED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Ch. 8
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 19:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet! i luved it, enough drama to keep me traped, and enough giggles to make me smile. i luved it, and i hope 2 read more soon! :D
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2007 20:48 EDT
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Thankyou that was very nice to say...XD......Love the Chapter by the way....I'm glad they got that little mis understanding worked out......Can't wait untill I find out how the story unfolds....................nyuka
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Reviewed By: clusterlizard1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 09:22 EDT
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omg! this is such an awesome story! i wanna see Kagome talk to Kyuubi-sama again... maybe be able to visit him inside Naruto's head like Naruto does. that would be cool. ~clusterlizard1
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 19:48 EDT
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Cool I am a wolf demon I love wolves anyways I love the story and wel I just hope something happens so the date doesn`t happen or has it already happen if it hasn`t happened yet have her kick Kiba weak butt for trying to put a move or something on her and make him look bad or have Naruto come to her aid and then he can kick Kiba`s butt around Konoha oh well I love the story and I cann`t wait till you update again and I hope that is soon
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Title: 6
Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 05:32 EDT
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I am very happy to be a vixen...LOL... I LOVED it, hehehe, Poor Naru and Kag getting yelled at inside their headsm, wonder if its louder somehow??? Oh well, I really liked it, but YIKES, poor Kagome that dream really SUCKED I mean after all she did actually manage to defeat Naraku, but I guess w/that ass on her tail for so long she must have been a bit traumatized...and who could blame her seriously The jewel voices are an interesting bunch aren't they, they caught the Kyuubi in her head but AFTER he'd been there long enough to see her go from Human to not so Human.... THANKS:D that was AWESOME, and I wonder WHY Tsunade did put her in Naruto's building...
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 20:33 EDT
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Thank you for the title of Taiyoukai now update again.
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Title: Love this story
Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 22:23 EDT
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I'd say this is a very popular story congradulations I hope you update soon because I want to find out when Kagome will finaly spill the beans and tell the truth about her life befor she came to them and the people she knew and how she came to be a Halfdemon by other means then the traditional ways, such as Inuyahsa and Naraku's way. I realy feel for Kagome in ever fic I read her life gets moraly screwed over untill the end and then the story end and she don't get to enjoy it...hehehe.....and what with Naruto's fox spirt all freaky like that saying she has ruined her self, it just seems to hold more value coming from him and its so sad cause she don't know what she's doing wrong and he doesn't know that she was a Human for 99.99% of her life and doesn't know of fox traditions.........to bad shippo could tell her enyting about that stuff considering he was only a kit.....so sad.....I wander how Inuyasha is doing that had to be very upsetting for him and now he has know way of getting back to her or ever finding her again......I wander how he is holding up...........poor guy.........I hope you update soon..............Nyuka..........P.S. NEW READER!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 04:21 EDT
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Woo hoo! That was totally unexpected, and I loved it! Kiba as Kouga. LOL!! And he blackmailed her into a date! Oh, that is SO good. You know, I've never been particularly interested in Kiba, but I like him in this. And Kyuubi and Naruto were being a little hard on her, -- insinuating she was behaving loosely. LOL!! She hasn't been a half demon long enough to know the etiquette of things like ear rubbing and tail petting. LOL! Nice one!
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 21:45 EDT
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good update do it again
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