| "Embracing the Kitsune" Reviews/Comments [ 249 ] |
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Reviewed By: ponygirl2112 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2008 00:19 EDT
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Well I really like it but the name spellings are very inconsistent throughout the fic, I think you have about 3 different spellings of Sasuke in various places & in the most recent chapter it's Sauske. Looking forward to the next chapter to see what happened to everyone.
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Title: Correction...
Reviewed By: VahnDeathHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 20:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I can tell that you enjoy writing and would prolly like all the mistakes you have done corrected, so I noticed that you forgot the e in believe in the part where naruto is doing all the blocking and the swiping
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Reviewed By: Taeniaea [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 10:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story
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Title: Awesomely Amazing
Reviewed By: Samantha_Shelby [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 17:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! I am a closet pervert (in person) so this chapter made my day! I love being involved in your author's notes! It;s *Sooooooo* much fun!!! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2008 02:05 EDT
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*Blush*...the way you stopped it last chapter I really didn't think you where going to go through with it....IS DURING A MISSION REALLY THE TIME OR PLACE TO DO SOMETHING LIKE THAT!!!....man I wander what Kagome would have done if Naruto didn't show up when he did...sigh....but gosh I can't believe you would think of me like that ...any of us....its so embarassing...lol..but hey it was funny and at least I didn't get it as bad as GrayPheonix...lol...well to say the least it was entertaining and well done...weird sound Ninja though.....wait a minute I just got a scary though what if this 'joining' *blush* of Kagome and Naruto does something to Naruto too...what if it hurt Kyuubi...I mean what could be the side affects of her curse mark on him.....also be for I forget are they mates now??? they did bite eachothers necks after all...hmmmm...I wander....well theres nothing I can do about it this is your fic after all....sooo update soon.....................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: animaygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2008 04:51 EDT
Comment/Review:
Fabulous chapter! I can't wait to read more, update soon!
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Reviewed By: El Ahrairah [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 16:14 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yummy.
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Reviewed By: Princess of dobermans [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 11:12 EDT
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meow i like it i wanna read another... and its very taste full too...please update soon... Demona
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Reviewed By: Princess of dobermans [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 11:11 EDT
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meow i like it i wanna read another... and its very taste full too...please update soon... Demona
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Title: Ch. 21
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 02:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooo, excitable lover! *squeals* hehe, that makes me giggle :D thank you for the wonderful comment on my personality! :D The Lemon kicked ass! I loved it! :D And it was sooo sweet, how they cuddled and admitted their love for eachother! *giggle* Pure perfection, once again! *nods and claps* And heres your 'Awesome Lemon Author' award! *holds out trophy shaped like Lemon* There you go! Now don't do anything 'special' with that! Use it to make more sex-filled awesome chapters (and next time include gaara
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Title: Embracing the Kitsune
Reviewed By: HayleyM425 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 01:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL! I loved it! Once again...your amazing! That name that reviewer part at the end was hilarious! Did you just come up with that on your own? LOL! But yeah! Hope you update soon! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Dragon Witch [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2008 19:00 EDT
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add 1 part heat, 3 parts hot wild monkey (fox :P)sex, 2 parts no birth control, stir, mix, toss, and roll and you get one big helping of bun in the oven if you catch my drift. Love the story none the less and if they did have a kid would it be 1/2, 1/4 or 3/4 demon. I guess it depends on who is participating. Anyway can't wait to read more and hope it is out soon!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 06:52 EDT
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hahahahahhahahaha....OMG....They are soooo..what would be the best word....Screwed...lol...I don't know ...Kinda feel bad for the Ninja for Interupting them... they might have a every angry fox demon on their hands....lol.....ya know I wander if Kyuubi and Naruto ever get jelouse (sp?) of eachother...I mean they are different souls for the time being...I wander what Kagome would do if they where ever seperated considering how much she loves them both and they both love her....gosh it would be and Kikyo v.s. Kagome all over again in competing for Inuyashas heart (does Kikyo even love inu any more or does she just want to make him suffer?)......any way I highly dought that is going to happen considering they are now half joined...still feel bad for Kyuubi for his tail loss.......I wander if their souls really did merrge all the way if they would be considered Half demon as well...oh well update soon........................Nyuka
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Title: kawaii-miko
Reviewed By: kawaii-miko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 08:25 EDT
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'raises hand' '.' your story rocks update soon!!!!!!!!!^.^
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Reviewed By: demonfromhell [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2008 13:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*raises hand for lemon* Damnit! I hate cliffhangers!! Can't wait to see what happens next! It's been just soo long since I've last commented on this story! You're doing a great job! Keep up the good work! Please update soon!!!
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