| "A New Perspective" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: TheAlmightyAya-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2007 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh, so sad!!! But so good!!!
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 13:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
That's HORRIBLE!! He was supposed to save her. I want my happy ending. It was well written, though. I do think it was naive and/or ridiculous of Kurama to think "no one would dare touch what is mine." Clearly someone had no trouble with 'touching' her mother. He should have known she was already at risk.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 05:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can wait ...
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Reviewed By: Kagome4Hiei [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 15:41 CST
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That was really good, actually. You could continue this story unless you still want it to be a one-shot and then make a series of one-shots centered around Kurama/Kagome stories. Please continue, unless this is it and I just made a fool of myself. Addicted
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Reviewed By: Evil Toilet Paper [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was nice. I finally found you on here. My work on Fhaven is going great but my pendrive broke so any updates that were to come... like chapter five, will have to wait till i get a new one. Sadly my computer does not have internet so i have been uploading from the one in my parents room. well i liked this. Sad, short, sweet... well bittersweet, but still good. I like it. you should pick up from the beginning, how they meet and lead up to that moment and then go beyond that with Kurama's reaction to Koenma when Kagome dies or she slowly recovers... or what not. well any way i like it. Gothic Lust
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