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Reviewed By: Susan On: July 31, 2002 04:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great update! That was some fight and it's not over yet. Radditz sure knows how to make an entrance, and it's a shame cause K/CC were about to...get personal ^_~. I hope Veggie doesn't wipe him out. I mean they could use the extra help in their fight against Freeza. Besides I'm developing a thing for the long haired cutie, and it's all Cha's fault. In her fic (DITH) he's just so likeable that you find yourself rooting for him all the time. Anyway, I can't wait to see where you're gonna take this part of the story. Considering how pissed off Veggie is, Radditz' appearance might just turn into a cameo. Btw, congrats on your new boyfriend and I hope your mom is doing alot better. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 29, 2002 12:36 EDT
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yeah, not a whole lot happened, but what can you do? it's well-written anyway. good stuff! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2002 15:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm Back!!! And wide awake too! Okay this chapter was sooooo sweet and do you know why? Because deep down you, just like Veggie, love it! In fact you two probably love all that mushy stuff more than the rest of us. Don't deny it! And you know why your K/CC lime turned out so well? Because deep down you really like them just like Veggie does! It's text book really...
Bad Kahlan! Having naughty little hentai thoughts about M. Trunks. Well he's so hot that even you couldn't resist. Don't feel bad, it happens to the best of us.
I wonder who the new chick is. Oh well I'm sure I'll know soon. And when is Radditz going to make his appearence!!!!! Sorry! Cha's fic Danger in the Horizon has me totally fixated on Radditz lately. *sigh*
Krillin? Yeah I know he is but with good reason. I know what you're thinking. There's never a good reason to take a character out of...well...character but there really is because of I have this really great idea for a seq-
Krillin: JB you're not suppose to tell anybody about that, yet.
JB: *blushes* Oh yeah. Forget I said that.
You know it seem like everytime your luck is good mine is shit. Remember the guy? Well we finally got around eerything that was keeping us apart and then I found out that he had a girlfriend! Can you believe that?! Man guys really suck! Anyway, now that I've gotten myself into a huff again I'll go pout. Til, next time.- the eternally single JB |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2002 05:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so tired that I'm barely keeping my eyes open but I had to tell you how much I enjoyed this chapter. I'll be back tomorrow to expand on this review and as you know it will probably be a long one.-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 25, 2002 23:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Considering that you don't care much for K/CC (and it being your first) that was a pretty good lime. Of course V/B are having a hard time communicating. And who's the new chick? I think I'm experiencing the Goku Syndrome b/c I'm confused about the line "Radditz is at it again". Did I miss something? Or will the long haired cutie be making an appearance? Anyway, great update and of course I'll be waiting for the next. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2002 02:02 EDT
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you know, theres a first for everything, i mean if youve never killed Yumcha then why not start? hahaha, oh thank goodness youve updated, i was kind of thinking that maybe you got stuck in the toilet and it wasnt going to let you go *whispers* dont worry, i know how you feel, its happened to me before. Anyway, oh cant wait for the next chapter, heheheh oh i love V/B KEEP GOING!!!! woohoo |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2002 04:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sure, sure...blame it on the parental units. j/k But seriously I hope your mom gets well soon.
This chapter was so sweet and I am lovin' it! And don't lie! You know you love writting sappy Veggie/B-chan moments. Come on, admit it! I admit it so why can't you? *sigh* You're in so much denial.
That little excerpt sounded juicy. I'm not going to guess because I love surprises.
*covers M. Trunks' ears and hisses at Kahlan* Shhh! He might hear you and think you believe the awful things you're saying about him. You're lucky I'm here to keep him from hearing the words that you will never be able to take back. And believe me you'll want to take them back when he stops speaking to you! Right Trunks?
M. Trunks: What? Sorry, I couldn't hear. You were covering my ears.
JB: Just say right.
M. Trunks: Uh...right.
JB: See!
But I was in the fic first!!!!!! I should have first dibs on him!! Not fair! *walks away to pout*-JB |
Reviewed By: Susan On: July 19, 2002 02:00 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YYYYAAAAYYYY!!!! Update, update! First and foremost I hope your mom is doing better. As far as this chap goes, very good! B/V seem to be getting closer. I like the fact that Krillin thought they had done more than just get some zzzzzz. I hope that Bulma gets that GR up and running real quick...there isn't much time. When is Kakarott gonna make an appearance? Can't wait for more ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: July 18, 2002 21:13 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!!!!!! practically NO ONE has been updating lately!! (yeah, that makes a whole lotta not-sense...)
neways, nice chap!!! yur so SPECIAL!!!!!
heh, i'm tired now. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2002 02:15 EDT
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*looks around* Hmm... no update here. Guess I'll go check the other fics... |
Reviewed By: SkittleKicks On: July 09, 2002 14:57 EDT
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Yeah, I think if I saw Goku emerging from the bushes, all stained red, I'd freak out, too. But, I'd throw the basket at him and run away. Hey, in Goku's case, it'd work. Now he has the food. :)
Ooh, Yamucha's a sneaky devil, isn't he?
Loving the K/CC deal, it's so sweet. (Wait a minute. Sweet? K/CC? From KNightwing? Great, I'm in the Twilight Zone. Hello, Mr. Serling. ;) ) |
Reviewed By: KangaKilla On: July 05, 2002 23:05 EDT
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oh i so loved this when i read this and then i couldnt find it! so im glad i have found it, im sad arent i? anyway i love vegeta and bulma togetherness hehehe i HATE yumcha so i dont know kill him off or something. but yes i love this fic so keep going and i cant wait until the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Serenestorm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 21:17 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
still loving this fic. hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2002 03:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter! There he is!!!!! *runs over and hugs Kakarot* Oh how I missed you!!!!!
Kakarot: Uh...hi.
That was such a cute way for them to meet. Just makes you all warm and fuzzy inside!
Pansy!!!!!!!!!! Well I...I mean...how in the he-...*continues to sputter incoherently for a few more moments before taking several deep calming breaths.* You know, I am not even going to deal with any of that nonsense you said about my beautiful, sweet, perfect Trunks! So there!
Screwed? Well I would have been if LPP had turned out differently. Keep that in mind for future chapters ^_~. Well 'til next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2002 09:22 EDT
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Will Chi Chi learn not to tell Yamcha all the details? How are Vegeta and Bulma? I'd think that by now, with Vegeta's atitude, Krillin would have tried to kick him out. LOL |
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