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Reviewed By: Susan On: June 03, 2002 03:13 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!! Serves Kiwi right. Nothing's worse than getting the "hershey squirts" in front of a huge crowd. Maybe he'll think twice before challenging Veggie again. I wonder where Frieza is gonna send them. Great update-can't wait for more ^_^. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 03, 2002 02:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chap Kahlan. I love the friendship that is forming between the three. Is Bulma going to make a Gravity Room for Veggie? Oh and I thought that having Radditz sent to earth instead of Goku was pretty cool. I can't wait to see what happened to him all those years. Good goin! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 03, 2002 02:36 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I see you're at it again, another great fic in the making. I really enjoyed how Bulma can manipulate the guards, but I don't trust that Kiwi. On the chap 2. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 02, 2002 20:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
boo! i do voodoo curse on you! (little quote as said by happy noodle boy... ever read jthm? you know, johnny? he da freak! *don't worry, not even i know what that means... heh...*) i likes! goodgooodgoood!!!!! meep! havin' a crazy day i am indeed! doop e doo!
lovins and stuff! write some more! be happpy! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 10, 2002 01:56 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great fight between V/K and the technicolor scumbags. I love the way Kiwi made his final exit (I could never stomach that jerk). I wonder what happened to Bulma. Maybe Freeza discovered what she had done after V/K went on that purge. Anyway, this chap was awesome and of course I can't wait for the update. TTYL-Sue |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2002 05:41 EDT
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Goku fasting? that's a scary thought. And of course, I liked it. But you probably already knew that. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Kandy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2002 05:20 EDT
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well it took me forever & a day to read it, but I did. I liked it too. I just wanna know why Vegeta acted like that. You got to tell me. |
Reviewed By: Lauren On: June 10, 2002 02:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is the best fanfic. that i've read on mm.org. You are a great author. this ficcy was very good exactly what i've been wanting to read. please update soon i don't know what i'd do if ya don't. and if you can could you e-mail me when you update @ mousey7891@hotmail.com. well keep up the Totally Awesome writing.
~Lauren~ |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2002 03:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do I even have to say it? Well I'm sure you want to hear it any way so I'll tell you that you've got another good one here! I really like their meeting. Very cute (well if you can consider anything Vegeta does cute). Anyway, looking forward to your next update.-JB |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: May 17, 2002 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this! it's really started out great!
i wonder why vegeta was so pissed off about what bulma said. very good meeting, between the two. goku acts so dense it's plain cute!
keep the chaps coming! (please... insane urge to know the rest is overwhelming...;} |
Reviewed By: nicole del [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2002 19:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a great story...I just wanted to tell you that...Vegeta was cool...so was Kakarrot. They were all in character...I especially like personality of Vegeta, he isn't too snobbish and egotistic, just enough for us to know his status, a prince of course. He's smart and I like the way he talks to Goku, he scolds him but you can tell that he cares about his fellow saiyin. Even his attitude towards Bulma isn't over rated. It's just right, they argue but not to the point that they become annoying. Attitude with class...that's what I call it.
The humor is there as well...it was priceless.
It was trully awesome story.
I can't wait until you continue it. Well...until then. |
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