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Reviewed By: Susan On: June 29, 2002 05:01 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know this story just gets better and better. I loved the meeting between K/CC and how she's trying to help him find his friends. The fact that Yamcha actually has a clue is refreshing (I've read one to many fics where the guy has the IQ of lint). Poor Dr. Briefs. I hate the way that Bribery shit is treating him and everyone else for that matter. Promise me that his end will be gruesome, disgusting, guaranteed to make people lose the contents of their stomachs. He deserves that and more for selling out his planet to line his pockets. So what's next? Some B/V interaction? Or maybe how Vegeta is driving Krillin crazy (that would be major comic relief). Ok, I guess I'll have to wait for the next chapter. Good thing is that I won't have to wait long since you update quickly. As always, another great chap from Miss Originality ^_^! |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 28, 2002 23:00 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay, kakarott is okay! of course, the trail of food leads him to chi chi; cute!
wow, i can't STAND that ribery guy! i really like yamcha not being an ass, it's a nice change from the norm.
wicked chap, and you update so fast, too! you're great! |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2002 01:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There were so many testaments to Veggie's sweetness in this chapter that I don't even have to point them out to you but just know that you have once again proven what a sweetheart my Veggie is. *sighs wistfully*
Well Bulma's still alive in this story so I guess you're off the hook...for now.
You know Krillin's my favorite human too! He started out my favorite character (yes, there was once a time that I didn't faint at the sight or sound of Vegeta. Hard to believe isn't it?) And then Future Trunks came all (yes the one you killed!) and I found a new love *sighs wistfully* Actually my love and total dedication to Vegeta started out as hatred (I actually lol when he got beat up by 18 and she forever won her spot as my favorite DBZ chick) and slowly became obsession as I saw the great person he was that he didn't want to be. It's strange how I love Vegeta to be sweet (which he is) and yet my favorite Vegeta is Majin Vegeta. Go figure...
*looks at story above* I'm sure that had a point when I started it. Anyway awesome chapter and can't wait for the next one.-JB |
Reviewed By: Serenestorm [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2002 20:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!! I hope you update soon. BTW what happened to kakarott? Will he and Chichi get together? |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 26, 2002 14:19 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bribery?! Why that son of a...I hope his dick falls off!! Poor Veggie-chained to a wall like that. Now if he were chained to MY wall I can guarantee you he would be having a good time. I already have the handcuffs (don't ask). At least Veggie's free but I'm still wondering where Kakarott is. You need him for comic relief. You put Krillin in ^_^. I love that little guy as well as Veggie's line about using K's entrials for dental floss. That's rich. Great chapter KN. Can't wait to see what you have cooked up for #11. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 26, 2002 13:34 EDT
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i hope bulma doesn't get caught on her way back to cc or it might be the end of earth!
i hope vegeta gets better super-fast; seems like he's not doing too good. and where's kakkarot? yikes! maybe the z fighters caught up with him and are hiding him out or something. oh well. kakkarot doesn't matter that much. only bulma and vegeta! |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2002 17:21 EDT
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This chapter was great! It's good to see Vegeta out of that dink hole! Bring on more happiness!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: catgirl On: June 25, 2002 15:30 EDT
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i like it, i like it! Is Frieza gonna get Vegeta and Bulma??? AHHHH!!! ok.......man the suspense is killing me man!! Thanks for getting the chapters up so soon! Most writers do like 1 every 6 months. At least I know there's one writer I can count on!!! |
Reviewed By: SkittleKicks On: June 25, 2002 11:30 EDT
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DAMN FF.NET! Urgh, I can't stand mm.org's layout, but I had to review. Since it doesn't seem to be taking them over there, I dragged my arse over here to try.
Yamucha being the Z-leader, I can see. Yeah, his personality could easily make him the leader of a small group.
Where's Goku? Do we get a Where's Waldo picture book, and are told to find Goku? Oh, wait. There he is. Near the food vendor. Dang predictability. |
Reviewed By: Masamune On: June 22, 2002 10:47 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my gosh! i'm anxious to find out what's going to happen to vegeta; will they sneak him out without getting caught? i had a feeling that general guy would be sneaky!
i love the transitional sentences, like the sound of the blood dripping on the floor and all that. you're very good at closing one scene and starting a new one and maintaining interest. i love it!! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 22, 2002 04:42 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I CAN'T BELIEVE VEGGIE IS CHAINED TO THE WALL!!! AND BULMA RAPED?!?! BULLCRAP!!! Ok *takes deep breathes*, I'm fine now, just needed to get out my frustrations. So what is it that Bulma needs to find? And that Ribley jerk, what's the deal? Bulma gave him all the info needed to see how full of sh*t Frieza really is. And where the hell is Kakarott and why hasn't he tried to free Veggie? Aaaaarrrrggghhhhhhh!! I'm going crazy here so pls put up another chap asap. Oh yeah, FFN is back up. Sure took them long enough. |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 00:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Is the dreaded Yamucha making an appearence in a Kahlan Nightwing fic?! And his not a complete idiot?! Oh the horror! So what is he like the leader of the Z crew since he's doing all the talking? That's a scary thought o.O. I wonder what that whole deal about Radditz was?
Kakarot! Kakarot! Where for art thou?
Oh, oh, oh, I know who the insider is! It's Mrs. Briefs right! No...oh. Well nevermind.
Catch a cold my ass. He's sweet and adorable and loving and kind and gen-
Vegeta: Now you're getting carried away.
JB: *blushes* Oh sorry.
Thesaurus? What's that? :P No, that would take too much work. I'd have to get up and find it.
Vegeta: But it's sitting in front of you.
JB: Shhhhh!!! I'd still have to read through it and turn the pages and stuff.
Vegeta: You're pathetic.
JB: *crosses arms over chest and turns her back to him* And I intend to stay that way too. So there! *sticks out her tongue*
Anyway, I'll stick with the same-o, same-o. Great chapter!-JB |
Reviewed By: trunksgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2002 00:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey!
Loved the chappy. i can't wait to see what happens next. well keep up the awesome writing.
Lauren |
Reviewed By: moonsaiyanprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2002 23:47 EDT
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Poor everyone. Is Vegeta's hand still broken? cause if it is, won't a senzu bean cure that? And will Vegeta be able to get strong enough to beat Freeza? help from the Hyper bolic time chamber perhaps? Oh well! Update soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Jadedbest [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2002 22:44 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap! They shot Veggie! My poor, poor baby. I have to agree with Susan when I say that I sound like a broken record with the 'great chapter' stuff but what else can I say, they're always...great.
Hey look! It's the 20th! That means that by the time I finish reading the Unexplainables there should be a new chapter up! Hooray! Sorry I'm a little giddy today. But with good reason. Can you say me + the guy = hot date (I hope)? Keep your fingers crossed. Great chapter.-JB |
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