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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: jlawrence On: March 17, 2009 10:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! I've been checking this site every... single... day... for the next post! The kiss scene between the twins was amazing. The last couple chapters made me so sad/close-to-crying (as they are supposed to) but even with the bad things happening in this chapter, things are starting to get so much better! I'm so happy that you're still committed to the book.
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Reviewed By: stomovcsik On: March 15, 2009 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel as though this is going to take you forever to update again, BUT, i will check in everyday to see if you have written it yet. :) Your the only fanfic writer i have ever stayed interested in this long. Yay for you! So please, update soon!! (no rushing though, i want your work to be as good as always)
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Title: I'm stoked, really!
Reviewed By: Stephanie Tomovcsik On: December 26, 2008 21:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, first, sorry for the 9. But a word WAS missing a letter (That word happens to be 'tray', you wrote 'try') just wanted to point that out ANYWHO! Your fanfic is so addicting, everyday (if i have internet) i check to see if you updated yet. You dont know how much my day has improved when i came to see that you DID! Your a brilliant writer, please continue with your crazy awesome skills of entertainment. And let your BETA know that she has much love for fixing whatever you could have harmed in your brainstorm. Au Revoir Mademoiselle
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Reviewed By: silentnight On: October 26, 2008 20:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the most heartbreaking yet perversely fascinating story i have ever read. im so glad to see an update. i can't wait for the reunion!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Miha-Mizu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2008 23:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE YOU!!! THIS STORY IS THE BEST!! All the angst, like you can really feel what he's going through.
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Title: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Reviewed By: Miha-Mizu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 00:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DON'T LET KAORU DIE!!!! Even though its like deja vu all over again DONT LET HIM DIE *sniffle*
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Reviewed By: RandomPerson5 On: May 17, 2008 22:48 EDT
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I absolutely love this story. The character development is amazing and you've made everyone seem realistic without taking away from the plot. As a side comment, I was listening to The Deep End by Scary Kids Scaring Kids and noticed that a lot of the song's lyrics fit your story very well [changing the she's to he's of course]. Anyway, hope you update soon. ~Midnight
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Title: oooh man
Reviewed By: liz663 On: April 26, 2008 20:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOH man is this chapter sexy! I read it the first day you posted it. In fact I was probably the first person to read it. That's how much I love your story xD. I'll refresh the page till I see UPDATED next to the title. Wonderful job as always and I can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2008 21:57 EDT
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oooo man!!!! shit man!!! good job around...sorry that i couldnt read it the day it was updated...i get in moods to read...and todays the day for fixated...man am i glad that i did...damn!
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Title: D:
Reviewed By: Liz663 On: March 13, 2008 13:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I LOVE YOUR STORY! I'm always on edge to see what you'll come up with next. I'm sad to hear you wont be updating any time soon but I'll look foward to it. Hopefully we'll hear from you during spring break ^_^. Good luck with everything!
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Title: Queen of the universe?
Reviewed By: Rabia On: February 26, 2008 15:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm incredibly fond of this story. So much build-up... You've actually given me palpitations. I've only ever been able to find ouran twincest stories as established relationship(bland) and complete and total implausible get-togethers(arg). This ones really one of the most realistic... but I'm still very much confused about the crossdressing. Does he want to or no? It's been bothering me quite a bit. I'm sure you've worked it in to do with the masochism but really it wasn't explained that much so it still gives me a bit of an uneasy feeling. Where as most of your story just has me on edge wondering about much next the crossdressing issue distracts me a bit from the bigger issues. ;p. Rant over. Love I This Story! Continue please~~~! Rabia(Y-Gallery)
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 20:18 EST
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another awesome chapter!!!! i think near is cute and rapeable too but im not into shota...but to each his/her own...and about the printing...i kinda stopped b/c im not going to school b/c im taking a break and so that means no free lazer printing...plus i dont think i can print anything out at my new job so that means no free lazer again...but to answer your question i stopped at stage 3 destructive personality part 7 and i had plan on printing the rest...i just forgot to remember what the formate is for how i like to read it...but also remember i have my pages set to 1/2" margins on arial size 10...oh and also i have the spacing set between the paragraphs at 12 pt i think... anyways with the chapters up to that much plus a cover page...i am left with 106 pages total and i still have more room to go b/c i dont have it up-to-date like i am reading...but eventually ill get back into printing it so please do not delete this in the near future...so with that said and done...i cant wait for the finally even thou i dont want this to end...but as a wise man once said...all good things shall come to an end...and with that i bid you ado
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf2028 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 17:09 EST
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Oh the suspence! D: This was a good chapter, you left us all wanting more! :P Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter. Bet its gonna be good. >D
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Reviewed By: MissTerie On: January 22, 2008 16:27 EST
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XD at last! its the one ive been waiting for lol. great chapter, cant wait till the next one =D
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Reviewed By: Rachel123 On: January 20, 2008 00:37 EST
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Where are you? :'( It's the chapter I have been waiting for....
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