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Reviewed By: TraumVonNacht On: December 24, 2007 23:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude...yesssss.....continue please, I love this story so much! please, please continue...
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2007 02:02 EST
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good job i cant wait for the rest of the story to fall into place...i have a feeling that kao wont go to the states after the party...and about the ana and nao i really didnt catch that but it all makes sense now...they just dont want to be the only ones in the world to have that kind of relationship...they want to prove that they are not insane to themselves...
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Jack Lawrence On: December 07, 2007 12:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I've been waiting sooooo long to finally read the next chapter! I've checked every day! I really liked the part when Kaoru was wet and Hikaru held him. I'm still wondering though why Hikaru didn't say anything about kaoru's "wet dream". Also, it's interesting that Hikaru was so pissed at him but was still really sweet and caring toward him. I'm surprised nether of them ether one: freaked out and like kicked the other one off the bed or two: made out. they should discuss kaoru's "whorish" behavior. He just needs to make up for hikaru not showing any affection. Also, it seems like most of the host club know what's really going on and that they like eachother. Why haven't they said anything?
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf2028 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 12:11 EST
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Wow. =D Nice twist, I didn't see that coming at all. This is gonna be good. Who knows that could happen at the party! >3
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Reviewed By: Ciia On: December 06, 2007 17:37 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oi, didn't you say that they were gonna hook up in this chappie? Maw... You HAVE to udate sooon!!! The chapter was terrific. M-hm. Much love. I love screaming/slapping-scenes... ^^ They're so deliciously angry. And I loved it when Kaoru said "I've fucked Nekozawa, I've fucked Tamaki AND I've fucked Chika!etc.." That was awsome. And that he actually slapped Hikaru? Did NOT expect that one... Hikaru shouldn't have hitten back. Thought I understand his pain and anger. Must be hard for him to have such a slutty younger brother. (I'm on Kaoru's side, I don't think he's a slut, but hey - I can understand why Hikaru feels that way. I mean the guy sleeps with anyone who's willing.) Jeez... And HA!! I knew Hunny had a thing w/ Takashi! ^^ That's cute. I really really can't wait until the next chapter! Update as soon as possible, ne? Hugglets!
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Reviewed By: xYuuramx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 11:16 EST
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Great Chapter of course, but one question, what happened to the foreign females? Did I just miss that or something? They can stay gone, anyways, I really didn't like them much :)
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 18:57 EDT
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yay!!! not as good as your other chappies but still good none the less...great job...i cant wait!
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gahhh!!! Suspense!!! It's killing me! *Drops on the ground, twitches a little, then dies* U-huh, you killed me with your suspense. Luckily for you, I'm immortal so I'll still be here for the next chapter! (laughs evilly) Please, PLEASE!! Update as soon as possible! I can't deny that I liked this chapter, a lot! But really... Kaoru is really starting to behave like a whore. Sleeping with two different guys in such a short period of time... And Hikaru just happens to overhear him when Kaoru's in his slutty mood. Damn it, why does Kaoru always have such rotten luck? And what the hell is it with Hunny? Why did he let Kaoru kiss him?! Oh god, don't tell me he's actually IN LOVE with Kaoru? I thought he was together with Mori-chan? Cos that'd be awsome (According to me.) Aaanyways! Keep it up and update soon! This is getting extremely good!
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf2028 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2007 12:07 EDT
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Karou your such an idiot. -_- I hope Hikaru doesn't murder him. D: And poor Hunny is like... wtf just happened? xDDDD
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Reviewed By: Rosekikilola [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 19:50 EDT
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KYAA!!!!! I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!! HOT! ok so now i have to wait and wonder what hikaru is going to do or say after he catches kaoru.... somthing big is going to happen in next chapter? WHAT?! I need to know!!! by the way i loved kaoru's outfit for this chappter i hope things start to get better soon and hikaru better confess! anyway a great chapter as always! ^_^
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Reviewed By: GreenEileen On: October 21, 2007 01:24 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fic!!! There should be more long fics, it gets you hooked and keeps you thinking about it ^^ A little thing that bugs me though is that you always write "Au revior" at the end or your chapters. I speak French as my mother language and I'd just like to tell you that it's spelled "Au revoir". Keep on the good work!!! =^_^=
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Reviewed By: Ariel Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 22:45 EDT
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ooooo that waaaaaaaaas good!!!!!! yay for fixated!!!!
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2007 19:09 EDT
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Great chapter, really! The lemon with Nekoe was hawt, but... I wanna see one with Kaoru and Hikaru soon. No worries, I know they'll hook up sooner or later. (Since you told me, hehe.) I just didn't understand that Swedish law-thingy... See, I'm from sweden, but I didn't really understand what you meant. Please explain it to me. ^^ Anyways, I can't wait for the next chapter! (and don't wory about the chapters being too long, I love it!)
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf2028 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2007 23:35 EDT
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I actually got teary eyed at the rejection part. T-T Hikaru was so cruel, of course Kaoru was being kissed as Hikaru walked in but still, Hika is being meaaaaaan! ;_; And Kaoru is just getting sicker, and now, thanks to Hika, he has a cut on his leg. Such happiness! xDD Can't wait for the next chapter! (Don't I say that in every review? xD)
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Reviewed By: shadowwolf2028 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2007 19:19 EDT
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Oooooo. Nice way to end the chapter. :3 Poor Hikaru. D: Poor Kaoru.
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