| "One-Half a Wing and a Prayer" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 19:56 EST
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WHAHAHAHA!!! Oh man, meets my expectations as usual, thanks for sharing this chapter of awesomeness, ja ne.
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Title: Chapter 30
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 00:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haven't left a review for quite some time now. The story's excellent and I really like Alexis so far.
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Reviewed By: ssokolow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 01:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hilarious ending.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 18:29 EST
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He'd go and kick an ass or two, that's what Brian Boitano do, he'd go and kick an ass or two, that's what Brian Boitanoo DOOOOOO!!! Cause that's what brian boitano do! Lol, I loved that song, now if only I owned a coppy of the South Park Movie uncut, neh. Anyway, I loved the last two chapters, they rocked. Keep updating, and the more dramatic it gets, it just gets harder to put down. Just sure the issues with the guild at least get partially resolved before Ukyo comes into the picture, otherwise you'll have a tough impasse, including her in things once the Guild becomes a real issue. Anyway, update soon, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 02:08 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have to say I enjoy this in spite of the darker spirit of this chapter. It gives a sense of communion among even the dark. New par As for the idea of demons equals dark, I have personal experience with this. As a writing project in my last year of high school, I wrote a few personal chapters of my favourite book, The Screwtape Letters (original by C.S. Lewis in the early forties). It's about a demon writing to his nephew (another demon) about how to tempt a man. When I wrote a couple extras (with the ideas of a teenager so it wasn't nearly as good as something I could write now) I found that in the end it had an effect that Lewis described. Enveloping yourself in a world of dust and darkness leads to a kind of depression. Dealing with succubi, which are demons of lust, desire and depravity, is no less taxing though in a different way. Writer's block was the least of the problems I had after that week. New par So, here's to recovery, hope you had a good Christmas, and have a happy New Years. From the offices of AMWOOD co
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Reviewed By: ssokolow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2007 14:26 EST
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Better a well-done serious chapter than a poorly-done funny one. Thanks for the Christmas gift. ;P
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Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2007 11:49 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I must say that you continue to impress me. This story is well done and has a very fun plot line. I look forward to reading the next chapter. From the offices of AMWOOD co
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Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2007 05:56 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that you have excellent command of the written language. Bravo. Also, I like that you took some downtime, so to speak, with this story. Let things be a little easier before making the cast get into the action again. I am very much looking forward to the next chapter. From the offices of AMWOOD co
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Title: chapter 26
Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 15:41 EDT
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Thanks for another fantastic chapter you really have a unique fanfiction here please keep up the fantastic work
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Title: Chapter 26
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 18:29 EDT
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Still looking good and going strong. I suspect that Nabiki's date, if she gets one (with Ranma, that is), won't go nearly as smooth. But...that's fate, luck, what have you. I'll also assume that Happosai's going to put Ranma through holy hell and call it training. Didn't work in canon, so I don't see how it can work here, either. True, it drives Ranma to push himself to his limits and then some, but...he doesn't learn anything new. And in canon, it was invariable Cologne that ended up teaching Ranma a new technique or advising him on what might work better, in essence being more of a sensei to Ranma than Happosai ever was. All Happosai ever truly was, was a royal pain. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Chapter 25
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 06:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Happosai has arrived. I really like your take of his character. He seems much more interesting this way than in canon. Fabulous job once again.
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Title: chapter 25
Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2007 01:02 EDT
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I love this story you are doing a fantastic job writing this please update again a.s.a.l.a.
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Reviewed By: ssokolow [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 15:43 EDT
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Thanks a bunch. It's far too rare to see a Happosai who is serious and yet still himself.
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Title: Ch. 25
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2007 15:12 EDT
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Still looking good...but leaving EVERYONE that is out to do Ranma harm alive and free to continue trying to do so is...unrealistic and extremely foolhardy. True, no one ever suffered seriously in the canon Ranma universe, but...none of them actually seemed to 'seriously' intend permanent harm, like Enma, Genma and Gosunkugi. Of course, there was Saffron...and Ranma did kill him. I guess either Nabiki or Shampoo will have to be killed, or at least seriously maimed, before you'll allow Ranma to actually take the final option. I seriously hope that you're not one who believes the unrealistic belief that 'nothing justifies the taking of a HUMAN life', not even to save another's life. There's no such thing as a 'true' pacifist, as they all die for their belief...unless they can find others to do their killing for them so they can continue living their fantasy.
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Title: Chapter 24
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2007 06:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter once again. And I love what Nabiki has done to Gosunkugi. Will we soon see the consequences? Gos peeing in class?
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