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Title: Me
Reviewed By: BlacRoseFire On: March 18, 2011 16:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. I really love it. I can't wait to get started on the sequal. I loved how The Nerima Wrecking Crew handale the demons. |
Title: Hm...
Reviewed By: Vassago-Toxicity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2009 14:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The only thing I'm hoping for right now is that Ranma won't start liking guys and fucking them after this chapter. That and an explanation for why Ranma didn't have a hymen, or why it didn't hurt for the first time she'd be stretched beyond a few fingers. Martial Arts training and Demon anatomy maybe?
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Reviewed By: Clouddancer1014 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2009 01:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
---Waiting impatiently for the sequel. When is it coming out?
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Reviewed By: Dbouncer99 On: February 07, 2009 06:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been one of the more enjoyable fanfiction stories of the Ranma universe that I have read in a very long time. The characterization of ranma himself was very well done and his development through the story left me enjoying what I read. This story has alot of untapped potential left with it being finished so early into the canon storyline, but even if you don't get to writing the sequel you had in mind I would like to say thanks for sharing your writing anyway.
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Reviewed By: Narsil [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2008 09:39 EDT
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Just finished the whole story and that was one fine piece of storytelling, easily one of the best Ranma fanfics I've read and definitely the best adult-level one. While Polarity is looking good I hope you also find time for the sequel, though at least you did finish the complete arc (a more than minor miracle for fanfic).
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Reviewed By: Love Psycho [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 14:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Giant sucumbus cake for you! Now...to see if the other is up...after the cold shower...
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Title: Chapter 33
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2008 05:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant finish to a brilliant story. The final scene was HAWT. Can't wait for more.
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Title: From Beginning to End
Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 13:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that I found this a very good story. Ranma's curse wasn't as nasty as he feared and it turned his life for the better (or so he sees it). Yes, things are a little complicated (two wives, demon assassins waiting, two succubi sisters, a still boy hating in-law) but hey, that's life (or at least Ranma's). I look forward to the continuation of this little mis-adventure. By the way, how far along are you continuing things? Might children be involved (Nodoka: GRANDBABIES!!!) From the offices of AMWOOD co
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Title: Epilogue
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 22:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
Overall, it's been a good read and mostly enjoyable. The only real downside that I can point out is...that this seems to be yet another Ranma becomes a girl-cursed-to-occasionally-be-a-boy fic. Granted, you did toss in a few incidents of Ranma-kun being 'manly' with the girls to appease some of us readers, but...that's exactly what they felt like, attempts to appease. I seriously hope this trend will not continue into the second part, or you may as well 'lock' the curse and be done with it. This may sound a little harsh, but I, for one, would like to see a bit more of the 'real' Ranma, who is MALE. HLS is all well and good, but just as boring after a time as 'straight' male-on-female intercouse, especially when the balance between the two types (considering the dual nature of the character) is so heavily slanted to one side as opposed to the other. On a further note, for something 'different' and that I've never seen in any fic wherein Ranma's cursed with a magical/demonic/divine form...how about having some of those powers/abilities/needs begin to affect his male form, as well? Kind of a bleed-over effect.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 19:39 EDT
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Heh, and what an awesome ride it has been. Continue to write, live, love and fuck. But always enjoy yourself, and the life you have, and live it like there's no tomorrow. Continue to write, and update. Ja ne.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2008 16:09 EDT
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wow its been a wile since i read this story im glade you have been keeping with it it is a fantastic story please continue to update a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows
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Title: Chapter 32
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2008 18:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Simply perfect. Nothing else to say.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2008 22:00 EDT
Comment/Review:
Man, and the story si nearly over? Damn. Well, just write the next chapter, the conclusion soon, and get started on the next chapter of this story soon. So, update again soon, ja ne.
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Title: Chapter 31
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2008 13:18 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 12:05 EST
Comment/Review:
Heh, light music, I'd say more like fight music. Neh. Anyway, love the filler of an update, need a little bit of prep before any epic battle. So, definitely looking forward to the next chapter (like I do all your writing!). Neh, so update soon, will ya? This story is as interesting as always. Ja ne.
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