| "One-Half a Wing and a Prayer" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Title: Chapter 23
Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 09:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really devious of Gos. But I think Ranma let him off the hook too easily. As to learning more about her demonic powers Ranma could have simply threatened Gos to reveal everything or else...
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Reviewed By: Yoshomo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 17:06 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Made my day after finding the new chapter posted. Excellent work as always. Looking very much forward to what happens to Kuno & Gosunkugi when Nabiki finds them.
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Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 02:22 EDT
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So Gosunguki thinks he's figured it out... Oh, the whoopass will be glorious.
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Title: chapter 23
Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 20:20 EDT
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i love this story thank you for updateing please update again a.s.a.l.a.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 17:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter. Ranma really can't get a break. One crisis averted and the next is already waiting. But as Gosunkugi generally screws up all of his schemes I wonder what you've planned
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Title: Chapter 22
Reviewed By: Tai Khan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 19:02 EDT
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Loving the story, and looking forward to more. Only complaint I can make about it is...you seem to be going out of your way to throw every imaginable obstacle and stumbling block possible at the trio. It's like the god Murphey is dogging their every step, and even manufacturing things that can go wrong for the trio (the Phoenix Pill, for instance) if nothing is apt to appear on its own. Too many problems for the characters is just as bad as everything going their way all the time...in other words, it begins to feel contrived and forced.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2007 15:32 EDT
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Cool as ever to see an update. Still, Jazz is dead? Oh noes!!! Lol. Anyway, it's awesome seeing mroe of this story (and frequent updates rule HARD! Okay, I need to get going, later
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 08:00 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Each new chapter is better than the last. I love your new OCs. They have a lot of potential I think. Can't wait to see what their plans for Ranma are. As for the cat's tongue pressure point, Cologne can always use the phoenix pill.
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Reviewed By: Tuhali [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 23:45 EDT
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Man... that was an awesome chapter!!! Whatever is in that mind of yours, can you bottle it up and sell it? XD Nice twists and turns. I look forward to your next chapters.
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Title: chapter 21
Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thank you for the new chapter i love this story please keep up the fantastic writing and update again a.s.a.l.a.
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Title: bloody briliant
Reviewed By: the walker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 13:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i sumed it up in the title BLOODY BRILIANT KEEP WRITING
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Reviewed By: Tuisto [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2007 10:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it! While Ranma geeting a demonic curse isn't anything new to fanfiction, this one is probably one of the best I've ever seen. The creativity and originality to not have Ranma locked, but still have this as and good action packed, mystery involved, multiple partner yuri lemon fic, make this work outstanding. Makes me ashamed that I kept putting off reading this story. I'll eagerly await more. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: June 28, 2007 02:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. Nabiki is really doing good for a city girl. Wonder how the amazons are going to react to her presence.
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Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2007 16:56 EDT
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wo fantastic i love this story please keep up the fantastic work and update again a.s.a.l.a.
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Title: fantastic
Reviewed By: firelord [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 14:07 EDT
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wow another fantastic chapter thank you please update again a.s.a.l.a. i love this story it is truly original in its plot
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