| "One-Half a Wing and a Prayer" Reviews/Comments [ 92 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tuhali [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 15:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Read all 10 chapters in one sitting... very well thought out and put together. I'm loving this fic the more and more I read it. Please keep up the good work. I like how you don't just follow the anime/manga storyline and come up with your own ideas and events as well as tweaking the actual events to your liking. I haven't been on this site in a long time, but now I have a reason to check back to this site often. Once again, please keep up the good work. Nice cliffhanger at the end of chapter 10 (I hate when people do that because now I'll be checking almost everyday in April to see if you've added more to the story.)
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Reviewed By: AMWOOD co [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 06:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit that this is one of the best stories I've ever read on any fanfiction site. Well written, excellent form, and a terrific idea. Also, changing Shampoo like that, brilliant. Keep up the excellent work.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 04:27 EDT
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Cool, sometimes ya need a break on the writing thing. Well, right now, I need a break on the reading thing. I need to get a few things done before I get some sleep, and then head back to school tomorrow. Well, good luck with future storyline events. Later!
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 17:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll just say what I usually say. Excellent.
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Reviewed By: iatnehfognik [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 12:51 EDT
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I love it, there isn't any more to say, the style is great, the content is great, overall is a great fic. Hope you update soon Ho-Iatneh
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 14:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES! A new chapter. This fic is still doing great. Not comprised only of sex scenes but with a real story. And you obviously got lucky with your girl. I'd like to find someone like that. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Zenaku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2007 16:06 EST
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Hmm... this is looking good. Heh, I wonder if Nabiki will reveal that she knows what Kasumi dreams about.
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Reviewed By: DrewB1442 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 16:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good so far. I kinda liked the little bit neat Jersey City, but did you have to make a View Askew reference?
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Reviewed By: ArticMuse [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 11:10 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great story. I look forward to seeing what happens in future chapters. Especially how the circumstances so far will play out with the variables that have yet to take effect or be introduced into the story. Hope Akane gets mental help before she does something really bad. Not sure what to say about Kasumi's suppressed libido.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 15:49 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent like always. Can't wait to see what happens once Ryoga finds out that Ranma is the redhead of his dreams. And Kasumi has nice dreams, but I expected as much.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2007 10:32 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHAHAHA! Always awesome when in Jersey city.
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 10:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent chapter once again. Your story flows really well into the canon universe. The end of this chapter is interesting... Kasumi the closet pervert ^_^. Will we see a threesome next time?
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Reviewed By: Dumbledork [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 00:57 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter once again. So far Ranma has two girls interested in him/her. Can't wait to see who'll be next. Maybe Ukyo or Kodachi.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 17:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, love the story, love the ideas, and I'm greatly looking foward to how Ryoga acts when he finds Ranma again. Still, mysterious abilities, and unknown additional powers, all fo these have serious repurcusions, I would think. Neh *shrugs*. Okay, I suggest weekly updates (gives enough time, maybe every other week if needed, but I don't think it will be). Anyway, looking foward to next update, later.
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Reviewed By: iatnehfognik [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2007 06:52 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn, that is good, hope to see more at the same paste you are going.
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